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January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well this was beyond excellent. I've wanted to write a Goten/Bra story myself. Bravo lady! *applauds* P.S. I can't imagine anything but Bra ending up with Goten and Trunks with Pan!
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ;)
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Seducing a Saiyan
That was a very good story.
It had a full plot that most lemons I’ve read don’t have.
It was a great plan trying to trick him to have sex with here.
You gave it feeling not just lust/pleaser you gave it…I don’t now what to say.
It’s the best lemon I’ve ever read ill just leave it at that.
PS. This is my first and probably going to be my only review so that says something.
That was a very good story.
It had a full plot that most lemons I’ve read don’t have.
It was a great plan trying to trick him to have sex with here.
You gave it feeling not just lust/pleaser you gave it…I don’t now what to say.
It’s the best lemon I’ve ever read ill just leave it at that.
PS. This is my first and probably going to be my only review so that says something.
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story... Me like and I think someone stole and changed it
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the best fanfic I have ever read, it was eloquent and lovely. The story, the love and the sex...it was beautiful smut.
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi!!! This is one of the best fics I\'ve ever read ever!!! In the history of ever!!! I love love love love love Bra/Goten pairings as much as I love Pan/Trunks pairings! This was a really really great fic! Please write more Bra/Goten stories! Please!
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok.. I VERY rarely give any good comments on here because these people who write these fanfics are such morons but this... this was great. This was... wow. I am speechless. But honeslty I wouldnt make another chapter it would just take away from the first.
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I\'m obviously not signed on, but I thought this ficwas exceptionally great. I love the way you wrote this. You are personally one of my favorite author\'s and that\'s a lot coming from me because I\'m a complicated person, just trying to make life simple, but then again things never work out like that do they?
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story!