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i thought ur story was great, you should think about writting new chapters or a seaquel to it.

I loved this story it was soooo cute and adorable. It was a very interesting and fascinating fic. I liked the fact that you portrayed Bra as a different person, but not like a shy timid girl. This fic rocks I loved it!!!!!!!!!!
D.B.

this...was...by...far...the...best fanfic i have EVER READ

that was amazing! such great detail. So well written. You wrote the emotions really well

You know normally I don\'t care for the stories about the yongest generation of DBZ because they\'re usually written by kids who don\'t understand sex, but for once I got to read one by someone who has clearly had some expereince in life. But then you are married right? :) I very much enjoyed this fic. It was beautifully written, amusing and wonderfully sensual. I immediately put it on my recommended readings. I\'ve always enjoyed what you\'ve written and a look forward to more. (Maybe a hot Gohan/Videl fic...) :) Great job and please continue to delight us with your stories.

girl that was omg i just can\'t put in words..tongue wagging here....a very nice change....please write more more more more...please...maria aka...maccam