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awe! update soon! that sweet. i read this already in your first verson but its good^^

*rofl* Poor Kai! *pats him on the shoulder* Hope he gets it right this time. Update soon please, this was a great chapter!

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KAI-2 HOURS LATER

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KAI-24 HOURS LATER

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KAI- 1YEAR LATER

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KAI -DAMN YOU WOMEN WOULD YOU JUST REVIEW!

FINE FINE.

FUNNY STORY YOU GOT HERE. I HOPE YOU RIGHT THE LEMON TO IT I CANT WAIT. I SWER, THIS HAS GOT TO BE THE FUNIEST ONE I READ SO FAR. I LOVED WHEN HIRO AND GRAMPS CHASED KAI. I WAS DIEIN.
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KAI- YEH YEH VERY FUNNY

HIRO-KAI

KAI - DAMN!*RUNSAWAY*

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ANY WAY HURRY WITH THE LEMON CAN\'T WAIT.

you can,t end it there!!!!!!!i want action damn you!!!!i love sex games of torture!!!!!CONTINUE PLZ!!!!PLZ!!!!!PLZ!!!PLZ!!!!i love kai!

Just to let you know ... the words \'gifts\' is a plural and therefore doesn\'t take an apostrophe. Story was fairly written. Sex scene came on way too fast. I did find some pieces of the story amusing. If you intend to write more, I would highly recommend fleshing out the details.

I whan`t the lemon for this… involving gifts plweeezzzzzzzz ^__^

great story hope u keep it \"cumming\" heheh
cant wait to see what the boys get up to next
let me know when the next chapter is posted pls

Of course you should write it. What you already have is wonderfully written. If you write more the reviews shall come.

Yes you should go through the trouble of writing it!!! Now go and and get troubled, you bohersome beast! Just kidding. Luvd ur story!!! *Glomps You*

Great fic. I loved it. ^^ Funny as well...i mean poor Kai getting chased down the block by Gramps XD very amusing. Great job.^______________^