rate_review Reviews

Soooo loved this story, very hottttt(claps) loved the chemistry between the two. I was shocked at first with vegeta wanting to have sex at chichi's place but he actually made a good argument. Well done!

I like the first part, it is nicely done and the two main people (Vegeta and Bulma) seem to be in there normal moods wich is nice to see. Vegeta wanting to mate in Goku\'s home is alittle odd but it worked fine in this. The second part was rather sort but the killing of the buzzer was funny.

i think it has something to do with summaries...but i don\'t know. i\'ve been trying to figure it out for myself. neway, nice little story.

keep writing more what happens when bulma went over you can\'t just end it like that..

I thought this fanfic was great! I never get tried of Bulma/Vegeta lemons and having them set at Goku and Chichi\'s house is very original. Don\'t worry to much about hits and reviews. Some people have favorite authors that they always look out for and others only read the first line of a summary to see if it\'s worth their time. The more you write, the more people will read and review and list your stories as some of their favorites under their profile. (sorry, runon sentence there!) Either way, great work with this story and I\'ll look forward to future fics!!!