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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this pairing caught my eye, even though I was looking for something odd like BrollyxGoku XD
Still this is interesting, since I love CC/G B/V and it has a yaoi twist on it for characters that are not as popular as G/V (honesty....I like gokuxvegetaxgoku, but Raditz as well as other characters need loving too!)
I will continue to read this..one my eyes work again this late at night -_-;;;; I am typing bogus even on this review.
continue please though..I love this story XP
Still this is interesting, since I love CC/G B/V and it has a yaoi twist on it for characters that are not as popular as G/V (honesty....I like gokuxvegetaxgoku, but Raditz as well as other characters need loving too!)
I will continue to read this..one my eyes work again this late at night -_-;;;; I am typing bogus even on this review.
continue please though..I love this story XP
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Majorly hot! I LOVE ChiChi. And this story is hilarious! How\'s Goku gonna react? Oh, I\'m so excited! I hope dear Gohan will understand... This is going to be great!Please update! Great fun!
-Cherry
-Cherry
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was worth my time. Oh boy, what are Sharpner and Erasa going to do? This looks bad!
Poor Gohan! NOT the best way to find out about his mother\'s career! However, he doesn\'t seem to upset about it. Only that she never told them. Unless I got the wrong impression interely!
It is good! Please continue!
Poor Gohan! NOT the best way to find out about his mother\'s career! However, he doesn\'t seem to upset about it. Only that she never told them. Unless I got the wrong impression interely!
It is good! Please continue!
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay finally updated took you long enough. Who the hell is Mai? guess ill find out soon. Come on get to the good stuff, this chapter was preety boring nothing much happened try to have something more happen next time. Update soon
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December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
snap crackle pop... nice but yes a bit boring. update soon
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December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the Goku.Chichi action, It\'s not often you get to read ANYTHING good about those two.
Alot of people have problems with Chi - which I don\'t understand. She\'s one of the best characters ever created :) ( and also more missunderstood then Sesshoumaru from Inuyasha for God\'s sake )
And I also don\'t understand why some people feel the need to kill her off and have Goku pair up with some stupid OC character or Bulma.
Bulma is Vegetas and Goku is ChiChi\'s. Simple facts ;p
Anyway, Thanks for such a good fan-fic ~ Please write more. I\'ll be reading it :)
Alot of people have problems with Chi - which I don\'t understand. She\'s one of the best characters ever created :) ( and also more missunderstood then Sesshoumaru from Inuyasha for God\'s sake )
And I also don\'t understand why some people feel the need to kill her off and have Goku pair up with some stupid OC character or Bulma.
Bulma is Vegetas and Goku is ChiChi\'s. Simple facts ;p
Anyway, Thanks for such a good fan-fic ~ Please write more. I\'ll be reading it :)
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December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mwuahahahahhahahaha, the Briefs inquisition. I loved that.
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH HELL NO please don\'t put any female/female thats just plain nasty and I like where this is going and also could you make Goku a SS4 next lemon **puts on the best puppy dog face** pretty pretty PPPWWWWEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEEE ^-^ update soon ^-^
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
continue nice so far
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
no f/f action please its not my thing but if it is yours i\'ll respect that it is your story after all