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Wow. Such an intense and dangerous passion. The way you write has a very cinematic feel, I really feel like I'm in the head of the character, at the center of their deepest secrets, their darkest instincts. I really don't know how to put it into words but there really is an outstanding sense of urgency seeping through the 1st chapter. Can't wait to read more.

I adored the fact that your style, even 'though a little bit restrained, was a source of a breather to me... an yaoi that's not only smut, where the characters think (erm... forget Trunks breakdowns) and feel.

good job

*winces* Poor Gohan! That was...surreal, and Trunks, I felt so bad for him too! I'm glad this is turning to be more than a physical thing and hey, lookit, Bulma KNOWS her son afterall. Aww....I always thought Trunks had a heart, not a very huge one, but one none the less and it's hard to see him hurting like that-despite how great his body feels. And Gohan's a sweetheart, though he missunderstood the hurting part, I'm glad he has enough control to stop.Wait....hmm, Maybe Gohan knows what he means...wait, ack, it's confusing! I guess not...NO! LISTEN TO WHAT HE HAS TO SAY, DAMN YOU!!!!! AND TRUNKS SPEAK!!!SPEAAAKKK! I'm going to the next chapter, hopefully it will cheer me up.

Broke his dick, lol! So glad Gohan heard Trunks and Goten's talk, so freckin glad!!! And that Gohan was finally informed of what kinda hurt Trunks was talking about.Duh! Ofcoruse he was wants you. Anybody'd be crazy not to want Gohan...or Trunks.Glad Gohan knows how to control things a little bit better now, and that the "darkness" in him is still there. As long as he and Trunks cuddle afterwards, I'm satisfied.

That would be so funny, walking in on Trunk's in the office wacking off. Damn, those people in the office have nothing better to do huh? Lol, but atleast Trunks got his money's worth. I'm glad he didn't just come out and say it's love, that he can be uncertain...it makes the fic more.....realistic. DAMN! Two hours playing with his ass! My god, I want a piece of Gohan too! Lol, invented the orgasm....that's cute. I like that they're working things out and it's not just perfect. Like Trunks explains he likes when Gohan looses control and Gohan understands and quits beating himself up, cause it never works like that. Definetly realistic.That was a hot sex scene too....wow.....And the ending is so true. I have to wonder though...doesn't ANYBODY fucking hear them?

Either way....GREAT FIC!

I review as I read along, just to save confusion.

Damn, Trunks was an asshole through the entire first chapter. A funny one, but an asshole none the less. Haha, and poor Goten's broke with no job, but atleast it doesn't bother him. But also, I kinda felt bad for Trunks, attacking a solid wall to no avail. Gohan's will is amazing if he can turn down ALL of Trunk's advances...And the way he gets back at him with his Asshole unsaid...it's classy yet just down right evil! It's great! Oooh, Gohan has dark passions? Never would've guessed, but it sounds so damn hot! Him wanting to tame Trunks and all *grins pervertly as I think of dirty thoughts* Me likes the sound of that. And Trunks is so full of himself. A lot of his plans, especially as a kid, WERE stupid. Lol, but Vegeta's punishment was a little too mean. I badly want Gohan to give into temptation but at the same time....I feel for the poor guy, but scary as his desires kinda seem, Trunks can take it. By god, he has Vegeta as a father!!!! And Damn....Bulma couldn't've been any farther from the truth about Trunks! Poor Woman. Ooh damn! That definetly's gonna hurt. Let's see how Trunks handles THAT! Off to the next chapter.

Seems like they both want to break each other...which makes the perfect for each other, I suppose. They're both fucking crazy, that's all I know....and it's extremely intriuging! I like this. Usually, I go for them all lovely dovey, but this beats the hell out of the others. And there's this pitpull on a leash deep inside gohan, foaming at the mouth like crazy! No wonder he wanted to keep it in, but Trunks blown that right out to the wind. You evil little munchkin, you skipped the part where Gohan unleashed his....his something on Trunks? How could you? It's like your taunting us when Trunk's relays the scene and with the continuous masturbating, it must've been good!!!! Damn you...-_-. But i'm glad Trunks liked it! And that Gohan's not too stressed out, working on his off days...Jesus! Works out for the both of them...sorta. Aww, but I do want Gohan and him to fall in love too, and Gohan to offer him tenderness...but there is more chapters so maybe..just maybe.

Wow...I'm actually speechless.

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I think this is one of the better stories of any fandom that I've read. This is certainly going into my favorites. It's not just the story (which was hot, captivating, realistic, brutal, and did I mention hot?) but the style. Your writing style seems to come off so naturally that it gives the impression of imagry to the point you forget you're actually reading in the first place. Make sense? No matter, this was beyond fantastic. I'm not sure if you've written anything else, but when I'm done posting this review I'm going to check for myself. I sincerly encourage you to write more, this was simply perfection.

What happens after that?

I can\'t belive that\'s the end!! oh how i wish you would write more! lol i love it, nothing like a good GohanXTrunks fic!!! *gives you a cookie for your hard work, hell why not two* Goo job, i loved it!!! ^_^