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Omg!!! HOW could you just ABANDON this beautiful potential and for so long too??? How depressing.

Oh THIS is gunna be AWESOME!! ( ͡• ͜ʖ ͡• )(◕‿◕) I am SO excited!! Finally I find a story ofof my boys that isn't some cop out one-shot!! THANK YOU!!!

you have a very interesting story going on here. it\'s been a long time since you started it i hope you haven\'t given up on it. this story is well written and has a good story line.

I love the story so far. You write very well, and it\'s a joy to read. I can\'t wait until the next chapter. Keep it up!!

Despite being rabidly opposed to Elricest in any way, shape, or form, I find myself rather enjoying this. Your writing style is polished and professional and your grasp of characterization is quite good. My personal dislike of Ed/Al slash stems mainly from my belief that to add romance and especially sex to their relationship is a disservice to the intense and almost ethereal love they hold for each other, but somehow your Alphonse\'s innocent need for physical touch is very endearing. I\'m not opposed at all to physical contact between them, which unfortunately rarely occurs throughout the series, perhaps because of the obvious barrier of Al\'s cold metal body. Therefore, the idea of them being physically close upon Al\'s return to a living human body is not at all farfetched. I\'ll be interested in seeing how far you can carry this before innocent touching becomes--well, a disservice to their love.

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Yum... Elricest. I REALLY need to see the show and read the manga. I feel out of place, no matter how much I love Edward.

Yay! You updated! ^__^ so sweet i like the way your taking the story! OOoo is Envy getting a thing for Al? heheh I you can update again soon. cya! ^_^

Very nice so far! Do write more please, I look forward to what you write next!! Update!

i like the anime but i\'ve never read the manga(anime is free) but by the sound of it al is human now? like i said i didn\'t read the manga so i don\'t know if this is going to happen in it or not but if he is human would he technically of aged or would he still be like when he was turned into the armor cause metal doesn\'t age.........although i don\'t know i barely read it.Anywho good job ur a good writer.

Oohhh... nice cliff-hanger! ^_^ But please don\'t keep me waiting too long... I hope you add more to this soon. It\'s seems, well, interesting so far! =) Poor Alphonse though, I do hope he\'ll be okay...