rate_review Reviews

Heya, I was browsing through the FMA section. I was actually checking to see if you had decided to update your other fic, when I saw this one. I really liked this a lot. I normally don\'t read the song lyrics in stories, but Toy Soldiers has remained a fav song of mine for so long that I actually read them, and they fit so well. I love the way you describe each of them, giving them a human quality that is missing from the anime. That is what I feel fan-fiction should be about. Giving the characters added depth. I encourage you to do some more Roy/Riza, I really like the two you have posted.

Wow. I mean, I know this was a lemon, but that was very well wrtitten. It was extrememly graphic, and it was more about the people in it than the act. The addition of the song\'s lyrics from Eminem\'s \"Like Toy Soldiers\" (don\'t know the other song) was a nice effect that really did set the tone for the fic. Very well written.

This story is written so beautifully. Well done.

That was really, really good. Exquisite writing. You have the characters down perfectly, and I loved how you described Roy\'s feeling after Hughes\' death. Very touching, an excellent job. ^_^

This was very lovely and heartfelt. The song fits so perfectly with the mood, very good job. I enjoyed it greatly. ::Grins::

oooh i really liked this one. such heart. such warmth in even the most devistating of times.oooh exqusite ^^