rate_review Reviews

I loved it!!! Brilliant!!!! (wanted lemon) *sigh* I\'m too perverted for my own good... Very nice work! Write more Soon!!!!

i liked the story alot especially since you showed us another part of goku. sometimes i wonder is goku really as stupid as people think he is and i especially hate how some of the gang talk about him. the song at the end fit perfectly with the story.

First of all, I didn\'t even read the words to the song. I don\'t care to know what inspired it, I am just glad it was inspired. If for no other reason than this line....

\"My heart felt as though it were shattered, the broken pieces lodging into my lungs and gut. I could feel myself bleeding internally....\"

That was SO creative. I\'ve never heard heart break discribed in this fashion, and truely, for me, that\'s how it has felt in the past when it has occured.

Other than this, it was a wonderful ficlet. A very well written story on an old theme.