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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person Liah
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sooooooooooobs* Aw Millie died *sobs* i liked her too.... *sobs*

but at least theres a happyish ending O.o i mean this is good news for Kai and Rei right?

I lvoed it though, so emotional that chapter ^^

i cant wait for the last chapter ^^

Liah xx
person Jonouchi-Kaiba-Mokie
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read the whole thing, stayed up through the night to do so. It's amazing work! Anyways, love it and grr... Why'd you have to end it there? The suspense is killing me!
person TaiyChan
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cries* KAI DON'T WORRY! REI WILL BE THERE FOR YOU!!!!!


Awesome chapter, loved it! Keep it up okay?

I'm so sad that Millie died! She was sooo cute..... I hope Kai and Rei can get things sorted out now...
person star101
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story so far has AWSOME! Please continue, I'm anxious to read the rest!
person Vera
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*dance* update, update, update, update, update, update, update!!! *sad-puppy-eyes*
person Kei
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cries into hands* Such..a...cliffhanger! You're so good! I love your writing! Poor Kai....Poor Rei.....D: Damn Boris.... n.n Keep it up! I can't wait for the next update!
person Blackrose
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for late review. Been away and also decided to read the whole story aain. I just love it. Love this latest chapter. Keep it up. Hope Kai gets it right this time an they get back together. Please get rid of Boris. He's really bugging me now. Can't wait for more. Hope Tyson and Miguel are ok.
person Lady-Nikki
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! That was sooo good! ^.^ whats gonna happen? Are Kai and Rei gonna split??? Please no! Don't say thats true! *cries* I can't believe this fic is so good! *smiles* You have to update UBER fast.... cause you left it on a nasty little cliff hanger... grrrrrr

Update!

Wo ai ni! Aishiteru!

Lady-Nikki
person Liz
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. You stopped it right there, right when Kai might actually understand Rei's feelings. But I must say the story is getting better and more interesting with each chapter.
So
ON WITH MORE CHAPTERS.
Meaning PLEASE UPDATE ASAP.
PPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person D.S.
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So sorry I haven't been able to review the last 2 chapters, I have been extremely busy with school, and my art work. But man, as soon as I come back, I find that Kai slits his throat!!!!!!!!!! Jesus!!! Give me a heart attack why doncha! Sheesh!!! Then, as you cut off the story, you make Rei say something earthshattering and Kai hears it, and then you just stop?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! It's a darn good thing that you have the shield, along with Naoe (?) and... that person who's name starts with T... -_-;; Otherwise, you seriously wouldn't be alive right now!

But, on a happier note, you did really well considering you have had finals, seeing as how they tend to take up all of a person's time. So emotional, even if they didn't have anything too juicy. I really liked the part about Rei's aunt, it was beautiful and I went through a whole box of Kleenex reading it. Even if the song wasn't yours, it might as well have been. It fit's Rei's situation really well. So continue with what you have been doing, seeing as how you always manage to captivate me with every chapter, boring or not.

See ya!
~D.S.

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