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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person Pam
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAIIII!!!!!!!!!
DONG BANG SHIN KI! ^.^
I really liked this chapter!
But OMLH!
You made Rei kiss Salima and Kai watch!
*dies*
person dark-anime-slave
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*startz randomly stabing u everywhere* YOU FUCKING BITCH-SMACK! HOW THE HELL COULD U DO THIZ!!!!! *pullz out chainsew, and startz sewing off ur body partz*
person cutenekojin
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!! grrrr....Why did you do that!? Kai,poor him!! And Rei too, I mean your literally braking Rei apart and making him suffer isin\'t it enough for him? and then Kai too...T_T I am sad you know...And you might end it!? That makes me even sadder!! T_T *cries for real* ....*snif,snif* Well I do understand that you d have less time at home or to write your chapters because of school work, I didn\'t even have time myself to come and read, I had to print out the chapters and then read them when I had time...^^; But I did come and review *proud* .... Well if you are going to do one last one, make is really REALLY good and make it LONG!! I love to read yours stories cause they have this really nice human (as in real life situations) where people dont forgive that easily...^^; And if you just make it to short it would look like....i dunno....stupid...And dont even think of making Kai and Rei not end up with each other, that would be killing all of us fans!! And then we\'ll come and kill you!! lol, joking....or maybe not....^^; anyhow, good luck with your school work and write that long and happy ending chapter\'s of yours! ^-^
person Incessant Darkness
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DIE. Die. Why wont you die?! That was so damn amazing I loved it. No one should be this talented. All my crapped up stories suck but you, your stuff is amazing and I bet it takes no effort on your part. Oh I loved the angst, I loved Kai\'s reaction and I loved the fact that Rei lost everyting in that last moment of the chapter, its sad that he could finaly tell Kai he loved him but Kai wouldn\'t listen, Pure literary brillaince. As for the oneshot I don\'t mind waiting, really I know what its like to be busy [the past week I got maybe 20 hours of sleep if I was lucky].Anyways keep up the great work and definitely have a sequel and good luck with your essays and stuff. Update soon.

P.S. Ignore my spelling, it sucks despite the fact that english is my first language
person Crimson
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh dearie, you\'d better make the next chapter good or else I swear i\'m gonna kill you...or rather, I\'m gonna let Kai kill you. See, he\'s been wanting to make you a test target for Dranzer for such a long time now, and I\'m the only one stopping him. If your next chapter isn\'t what I expect, I\'m gonna *forget* to stop him.

Kai: BRING ME AND REI BACK TOGETHER DAMNIT!!! OR ELSE...DRANZER!!!!!!!!!! (charges towards Warrior of Flame with Dranzer ready to launch)

Crimson: Kai, down!!!

Kai: BUT SHE BROKE US UP!!!!!!

Crimson: She\'ll fix it...WON\'T YOU?! (brings out a switchblade and threatens authoress with it)

Kai: By the end of this fic, I expect to be wedded to my beloved Rei-koi, Boris should be dead and Salima should have found herself another guy already!!!! So fx this huge mess you made, and I might even spare your life, got it!!!!?!?!?!
person Meia
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes please do not protect her so that I my kill her. WHAT WERE U THINKING!!!!! HOW COULD U?!!! FIX IT OR I WILL PULL A SHUICHI ON YOU AND KILL U FOR DEPRIVING ME FROM MY REI AND KAI PAIRING LOVE!!! But on a brighter note, please update soon and please make a sequel as well. Thnxs and have a nice day. *carefully has hammer waiting to strike*
person Cat in the web
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, after that chapter you need your bodyguards! Really I hope in the next chapter Kai and Rei will be together again! You are not done with making Rei suffer, hu? It is a very good story, but I\'m almost afraid of what you will write next.
Well, mabe it seems like I like to suffer, but keep writing.
person Fantasy
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I.... Am.... Pissed off =.= How could you leave it there?!?!?!?!?!?!?! And let any of that stuff happen?! Do you qannt make us readers crwy? T.T
person Shitza
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You...

*incert millions of evil words, you do as you please*

Fights her way between her bodyguards. HeHe

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Okay, that was simply a joke. *glares at the annoying bodyguards* I am pretty sure it will all work out in the end, just please don\'t make Salima tag after Rei all the time, that\'ll make me sick!!! not that I seriously hate Salima, but she is not meant for Rei, and that\'s a final!!!

*Shitza\'s readers* What are you doing here, update please!!!

WAAH, they found me! GTG, but take a öeaf from that and update soon. *leaves before her readers tears her apart*

Shitza

Ps: If you do get seriously bored, you are allways free to read the Elemental Legend series posted on Ff.net

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person Shitza
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You...

*incert millions of evil words, you do as you please*

Fights her way between her bodyguards. HeHe

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Okay, that was simply a joke. *glares at the annoying bodyguards* I am pretty sure it will all work out in the end, just please don\'t make Salima tag after Rei all the time, that\'ll make me sick!!! not that I seriously hate Salima, but she is not meant for Rei, and that\'s a final!!!

*Shitza\'s readers* What are you doing here, update please!!!

WAAH, they found me! GTG, but take a leaf from that and update soon. *leaves before her readers tears her apart*

Shitza

Ps: If you do get seriously bored, you are allways free to read the Elemental Legend series posted on Ff.net

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