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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person blueinferno
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*crys* omg! poor ray!! *sobs* omgomgomgomg update sooooooooooooooooooon please! this is to cool ive been waiting sooo long! :P
person phoenix
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i can\'t believe rei is so nice

rei: *huffs* too nice
kai: that\'s okay baby i\'ll make it up to you
rei: smirksKita:*covers her eyes* THEY BURN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person xanae
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*O* this is amazing!!!!
don\'t worry, I\'m not going to kill you, I\'m giving you the oportunity to make things right XD
where the hell is Boris??? that £\"$£%%& Just put him in front of me, I\'ll make him pay!!!
and what about Kai?? TT_TT he has to listen to Rei, he MUST.
and and.... Rei\'s dad!! TT_TT I cried a lot knowing about his leg and all that stuff, but HEY!! this is your storym u are gog here so u can make a miracle occure.
hope next update does not take so long, I need to know how everything ends:
*chu*
person Raven
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do hope that the next update won\'t take too long, i really like this storry, and get upset if I see it sit for too long. It makes me think that you\'ve forgotten the story. I\'m really glad that you like this story as much as your readers do, one can tell when a writter truely loves their work, and you do. As for a sequel, when and if you end this, yes, I would love to read the sequel! I hope that, if you do make one, that you don\'t wait long between the ending of this one, and the begining of the next. I have never enjoyed reading a fan fiction nearly as much as I have enjoyed reading this one. Your play on the emotions, and the mental state of your characters is wonderful, and it keeps the story alive, and going. I look forward to every new chapter, and will continue to do so. Hope that you can update soon. Ja ne.
person LaDiNi
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so I love your story, but stop with all the disgraces already! Isn\'t it enogh elaready girl? Jesus, they deserve some love no? And damn Kai for that sense of oportunity ~_~...
Update and I for one won\'t kill you (I should!!! But as you said, no more story would come ;_;!)
person Draza
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you may have bodyguards all around you *jumps into air* BUT NOT OVER YOU!!! I\'LL KILL YOU FOR THAT ENDING!!!
person j.s
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nooooo
they were just starting 2 work it out
it was all doing sooo well
damn salima
grrrrrrr
update soon!!!!
kai and rei must get back 2gether!!!
person darkstar92
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just one more chapter! Is this the best time to tell you i get depressed near the end of stories that are more than awesome, for exapmle this one. And only one more left, this is such a good story i wouldn\'t mind if it never ended. Anyway, i was so shocked when i found out it was Kai, i thought it was Boris. Just what Rei needs, more crap put into his life, but sadly, that\'s what makes the story interesting.
person Blackrose
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no. *Grabs baseball bat and waves it threateningly.* You\'d better not end this too quickly. Grrrr. It\'s getting really good. Die Salima. *Whacks her hard.* Die Boris.* Whacks him hard and then shoots them both.* That asshole Kai needs straightening out. Boris better not take advantage of Ray, the bastard. Next update soon please. Intense. And who\'s gonna play the female role?
person Virpi
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You bastard! You\'ll better have Kai understand what Rei was doing and those two back together!!! And please SOOOON!!!! And please no more tormenting to Rei from Boris... He should die (and so you do if you don\'t update!!!).

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