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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person Michiru
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGACKT! *_*
I loved Wishbone! and Dong Bang shin ki XD ^^
Your ebbil! >.< Now I wont be able to get that scene of my head... I want to read the next chapter so much!!! ^^\"
I hope you fel an get better soon ^^
person maria
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAHOO! ya updated. welcome back. i missed u. this chapter is awesome. especially that part wen rei and kai were kids, it was so cute. update next chapter soon.
person Dark-anime-slave
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOH! phone sex! yay!!!!!!!!!
person D.S.
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! That was such a cute chapter!!! Kai and Rei as little kids!!!! AWWWWW!!!! I love the \"I am the warrior and you will be my princess\" part, it was adorable. I started laughing so hard I got strange looks from my friends. Oh well, what can you do? Great job though. And how is your wrist? It must be killing you! And yes, school is a drag. I hope that everything is going good though. I\'m very sorry that I haven\'t reviewed in a while, but school has been keeping me busy. I\'d also like to tell you that me and my friends have created a story on fanfiction. It is in the Hot Gimmick catagorie and it is called: Love Equals Squared by: Hot Gimmick Fan 007. It is under her name because she likes Hot Gimmcik a little more then I do. It\'s our first story together, and I\'d love if you could take a look at it and tell us what you think. Well, good luck and don\'t wear your self out! See ya!
person Cat in the web
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That chapter is sooo good! I\'m really happy that Kai and Rei are a couple again. They had me worried for a while. And I hope Rei will dance very good in the production. He deserves it after all what happend to him. And the other dancers deserve it too.
person Tsuki S.
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dies* Oooo please update at least sooner?? That\'s like...MAJOR TORTURE! >< mm I loved this chapter and I still LOVE the story and plot line! Keep up the good work, and I hope your wrist gets better! Tsu~Chan
person Arsinen
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet and sad at the same time. I felt like crying during th part where Kai thinks about Wyatt and doesn\'t want to be like he is T.T And the part about them being kids was so cute as well it made me smile when Kai called Rei his princess ^^...and when Rei was neat when they were kids I think it would have been really cute if they had used the same lines as they did when they were little. But hey I can\'t ask for more this was a great chapter I loved it and I can\'t wait for more. ^_^ I can\'t seem to grasp the idea that it\'s almost over. I\'m so going to miss it but hopefully you can come up with a new fic. That\'ll be just as good as this one.^_^ Well see ya.
person Shitza
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK

Don\'t leave it like that, update sooooooooooooooooooooon!

I\'ve waited like foreeeeeeeeeeever.

Can\'t stop reeeeeeeeeeeeeeading.

Shitza
person Anon
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh damn....i like where this is going
person Blackrose
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I\'m glad they made up and that Boris is outta the picture. Hope Kai comes back soon. Looking forward to more.

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