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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person Virpi
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uuuuuuups... Did I wrote review, when I last review your fic...? I think I screw up... I meant UPDATE soon! *blush*
person keisan
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eccellent! I cannot wait to see this. I\'m glad Rei\'s been able to strengthen himself as well as others around him. It\'s nice to see him strong and no longer helpless.

Number 1: Which television show was the little girl referring to? And what was it based on?
Wishbone which is about a dog(Wishbone) who acts in and reaccounts old tales, for example, Oliver Twist.--I watched that show, lol, liked it too.

Number 2: Who was I?
a)The little girl

Number 3: (I hope you all have good memories cause this is about a certain singing group.)
What is the name of the singing group that Garland has invited over and from where are they from?
I cannot remember the name of the singing group but I think they\'re from China...but I\'m certain this entire answer is wrong. Oh well.
person Draza
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, ummm...the first question was Wishbone!!! I watched it as a kid too!!! The second one...ummm...well most likely you couldn\'t have been the older sister since that would raise some seriously creepy questions as to HOW your updating...were you the nurse? I think, i\'m not sure, maybe...and for the last question...was the band 1TYM and aren\'t they from Korea? well those are my guesses!!! For the second question though, i`m not sure if the dog played a significant hint in this contest if it did, well then my second guess is wrong, but oh well!!! *crosses fingers*
person kiotana
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
#1 wishbone(dog who tells stories and i love that show. sux it doesn\'t play anymore)
#2...D
#3...noooo! damn memory!!!!
did you have to end it there!!! of all places!*tears* update!!! im begging you! up date soon!!!*on the floor* please!!!!!
im sorry i couldn\'t remember that last question but i just dont care about singing groups when rei is having his dramatic life pushed again.
must have kai/rei conversation!!!!*shakes authress*
*eye twitching like a maniac*
person ShinRigel
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay... What\'s the story Wishbone, about that lovely little story telling Jack Russel.
I think that you\'re the little girl, because you seem to know alot about being strong, since that was really written from the heart.
And lastly, erm... the only group that springs to mind is Gravity in China.

Good idea though and I offer my sincerest condolences. A dog is like a family member, and it\'s heartbraking when you see them loosing their life. *big hug*

As per usual though, this chapter was brilliant, and Rei\'s reaction is so sweet.

Phonesex though, eh? Can\'t say I\'ve ever seen that before in a fiction. Hmmn, bet it\'d be dirty... hmmn... please, please do it. That\'d be such a lovely way for Kai and Rei to restrengthen their pure and beautiful love... plus it\'d be HOT!!

Good luck with all you do, best wishes.

Shin
person Anon
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the tv show is wishbone, which stars a jack russell terrior dog who goes on adventures based on different books. you are the nurse in this fic. and i am lost at to what group garland invited, but i will investigate
person shi-tenshi
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yaya you updated. okay to answer your questions
1. The show was wishbone which I think was about a dog who told stories (been a while since I watched any kiddy shows)
2. I\'d say option D but hey I maybe wrong.
3. The group is called you know i don\'t think you ever said the band\'s name only the dancing group (which is rei\'s parents or Gravity as the public knows themand arew from China) all you said was they were from Korea.
Anyways hope you update soon. Ja ne.
person FireAndIce
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To lazy to sign in... Thank you for reading my story, I\'m very flattered by that. Yes, you were my inspiration for writing a college/university fic, and I\'m happy to say that too. I love you Kai/Ray story, it\'s so good. I can\'t believe you\'re leaving up all in suspence (AGAIN) at the end of a chapter. Don\'t make me start throwing my evil chickens at you, cause I will *brandishes evil chicken menacingly*. Anyways, lovely chapter and I can\'t wait for your next update.
person maria
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey ya updated. great chapter. update next chapter soon.
person Dark-anime-slave
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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