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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person Crimson
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You love getting death threats, don\'t you? Well here\'s a special one from Kai:

Kai: DAMN YOU!!!!!! HOW DARE YOU DO THAT TO *MY* REI!!!!!!! I SWEAR I\'M GONNA WRING YOUR NECK IF YOU DON\'T UPDATE THIS FAST AND YOU BETTER MAKE SURE *MY* REI-KOI IS GONNA BE ALRIGHT CAUSE IF YOU DON\'T I\'M GONNA KILL YOU!!!!!!!!!!! *pants* DO YOU HEAR ME!!????! I\'M GONNNA *stream of unintelligible curses*

Well, you heard him, get to writing!!!! Oh, and unchain Rei from you or else a lot of people are gonna be after your blood including me and kai. Oh yeah, UPDATE REALLY SOON OR ELSE *brings out a bazooka out of nowhere* DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and make sure Rei-Rei\'s well okay?

Kai: AND GET US BACK TOGETHER DAMN IT!!!!!!!!!!

byebye!
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooo me like...poor Rei so weak in this chapter...Kai needs to get his ass back and kill Brain
person Incessant Darkness
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You saved your ass but just barely, as it is I think you should be totured for all eternity for hurting Tala but then again I am an angst whore so i can\'t really complain. Keep up the good work and see if you can force a guilt trip on Kai so he can come back and make hot animal love to Rei to cheer him up. Great chapter, update soon.
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tala and raul are sooo freakin\' hot!!
person cutenekojin
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh!!! this is so good! BUt don\'t make Tala DIE!!! DONT!!! Then who will call Kai to tell him Rei had been almost raped and who will tell him too that Tala ALMOST died? Cause he will not die...he wont, and kai will come back and he will live happily ever after with rei, yap, nothing NOTHING bad will happen, NEVER! ^^; sorry got carried away with what I DONT want to happen ^^;

Write more, I can\'t wait to read what will happen next! Love de story forever! ^-^
person Meia
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can forgive you since Rei wasn\'t raped but u had better make it up to him or else. Anyways nice story still and I hope you update REALLY SOON. k.
person blueinferno
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARGHHHHH i swaer you want to kill me!! ur cliffys r too much *sniff* you gotta update SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON waaaa!!! whens kai gonna cum back!? *sob* plzplzplzplzplzplzplz update soon!i wait andf i wait and..and*cry* just PLEASE update soon! otherwise ill MAKE you *threatening voice*
person D.S.
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my GOD!!!!!! He..and..you..but...but...AAARRRRGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!Brain on overload! Jeez! I seriously thought that you were going to let Boris rape Kai! Jeez I think that I almost had a heart attack! But I really liked the love scene between Raul and Tala. It was funny to read about how angry Tala got at Kai for interrupting them during their \"play time.\" I think that was my favourite scene in this chapter(other then the part about Boris getting beat up!) I hope that you feel better really soon. And don\'t stay up late typing stories. It\'s not smart, you really need your rest and doing that isn\'t helping! So get better soon so that you can update with a clear mind! So feel better and take it easy! See ya!
person Cat in the web
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was hard, but at least Rei is save now. But I really hope Boris will get what he deserves!
person Draza
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn, you\'d think Kai had ESP or something...i\'m glade Raul finally threatened to withhold sex until he checked on Rei. *cheers* GO TALA, RAUL AND KAI!!!

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