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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person Blackrose
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. When will Kai get back? Will he get back? Will Boris get Ray? I really hope not. Please put the next chapter up real soon. This story is getting intense. Looking forward to the next part.
person Cat in the web
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rei thinks Boris is all talk?! He should know better! Boris druged him and tried to rape him. He shouldn`t forget that. I hope someone will safe Rei. And I want Kai to come back!
person Fantasy
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU CCAANNNTTTT Leave it there!! ITS CANT BE LEGAL!! T.T;; WHY?! WHy?! Why?! why?!........... WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Boris can\'t do that, can he? WHAT HAS THE STORY COME TO?! *A masterpiece* WAHHH!!!!!!! TOO MUCH SUSPENCE!! TOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH! *blows up from screaming* Ow....
person Ray 4 Ever
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. What is Boris going to do? I can\'t wait to see.
person kiotana
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
god i love this fic!!!! boris is so sick in the head!!! who the hell is gonna save rei this time?!?!?!
anyway i would suggest that someone else type up the story for you since your arms are wounded! get a friend to type it up for you^^
person Deathelf
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve read the whole story and I have to hand to to you, this story is the best!! Ur really good with putting emotion into everything, I can\'t wait to hear what happens next... the suspense! LOL
Well done on a very awesome written story! YAY! I\'m probably one of the only fans who doesn\'t want to hit u wif stuff, so be happee!!! Ok sorry to ramble, just keep up with this and um... well done! WEEE!!!
*glomps Kai*
Ok bye and keep it up! :) ^.^ YAY!
person LaDiNi
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okkkkkkkkkk........... dad is dying? weirdo...
this is getting too similar to a soap opera no? well, update, will Rei get there in time!?
person GS*
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AGH!!!!!!!!!!!!! sry 4 not commenting 4 a while my comp was acting stupid. but argh!!!!!!!!! i thoght that they would finaily b 2gether!!!!!!!! y!??!?!? wahhh!!. so is Rei gonna follow him or did Kai really did stay behind?? and it was something bad that happened to his father instead??. ahhh! all the unanswered questions!!! when will the Tourment stop?!?! update soon! oh yea i was kinda happy when tala said Rei was always feeling like the victim. lol. its aout time someone said that. haha thats all. XD
person kiotana
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*angry* you always have to end it like that!!! he\'s gonna miss the plane god damn it!!!!!okay....i hope your wrist heals...very quickly*glare*
plz update soon^O^
person kiotana
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awe!!! ray!!!! you idiot get your ass out there and admitt it to him!!!

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