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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person Nebride
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, I\'ve been reading this story non stop for like three days now, and you are really really good! Both Rei and Kai\'s behaviour annoys me from time to time, but that just means you have done a very good job portraying them, and get out their feelings and thoughts, making them more alive ^_^
As you have pointed out yourself, there are some spelling mistakes, but they\'re not really so importain, since the story is so brilliant :)
I\'m a sucker for angsty stories, and damn, you\'ve done such a great job, with not only the story in general, but also details and descriptions of both the characters and surroundings. You have this natural flow to the story, and it is so fun to read this because you\'ve put it together so beautifully!
I am definately reading the rest of this, so keep up the wonderful job you\'ve done to now ^_~ I just pray that it all will end good *hands you cookie*
person keisan
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo! He\'s leaving! I\'m glad you unveiled the truth behind Kai\'s feelings for Rei, what he said was all love. And now Rei...who became seemingly more unemotional- it seemed like his contant need for Kai wasn\'t really because he wanted to use him or needed sex, it was a love that he was too young/immature to understand. I love this concept. It\'s beautiful. I\'m actually surprised Rei hasn\'t really realised it yet...I mean, if he had, he\'d have been right over to the airport as fast as he could. I\'m curious as to what your ending will be, please update soon. ^^
person Incessant Darkness
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Since you were good and updated despite your wrist I think I\'ll be good and review. I like it so far. I wanted more angst and I liked the little bit of fluff at the beginning so this chapter was perfect in my eyes. Keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming. Update soon.
person LadyMichikoReturns
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
you cant keep ending them this way!!!
does kai\'s flight get delayed??? Does Rei get to him in time???
Does Tala eat chicken in a depressed state of saddness>

TELLL USSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS**cries** must read more!!!!!
person Chibi Drigger
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-blinkblink- Aww...I almost cried...Jeez! Well....-gives big bandy for your wrist and arm- T_T Get better soon!!! Well great chapter and poor Rei!! T__T...-huggles Rei-kun- Well can\'t ait for th next update and the chapter was great. Untill next chapter. Ciao -Cd
person maria
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey ya updated. great chapter. update next chapter soon.
person Kat
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn!!! that was a good chapter!!!.
Please update soon dont leave us hanging, its great so far but how come rei\'s being portrayed as the villan?
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!! let them get back together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

Kat
person Arsinen
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>.< You better not kill my Rei-chan. You know what would be interesting if this fic ends with a not so happy ending. I mean no killing off people bt that Kai and Rei stay apart. And then there is a sequel that for some reason they meet each othre again it\'s more angst for the readers although I would expect the second to end happy. But anyways that\'s just a screwy idea i had while reading this last chapter. WEll hope you don\'t kill your arm okay but I would appreciate an update soon. ^_^ See ya!
person Draza
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You wrote such a good chappie...i think i\'m gonna cry...*wimpers*
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh poor rei and kai..will they both just suck it up and be together!

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