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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person maria
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey im back! sorry i havent reviewed lately, studying 4 exams. but now im done and im back. those were some pretty sad chapters. i literally cried. i just hope everything goes well 4 rei. great chapters. update next chapter soon.
person Kanilla
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeal*I cant belive there are no more chapters so far...I`m litherally dying to read more of this story.....okay,from the start....*thinks*
First thing first,sorry I didnt rewiew any earlier...hrm..yeah,but i want you to know,I conside thits story to be the number one on my list of beyblade yaoi stories....and man,I have read many good ones..take that as a compliment,ne ne?cause this story is definitely one of the best you`ll find out on the net.the story is definitely not the average,the descriptions of the persons are so well written,and everything...I just love every pice of this story,every word written.That comes from the heart,I promise you that much.

I laugh every time Tyson say something pervy,I go all aw-ish every time there is some fluff with Raul...and I get all O.o every time rei and Kai are \"at it\" again*XD*to say,I LOVE IT!!!!!TO PIECES!!!!*glomps you for writing such a magnificent story*

I find the way you write Kai such bastard-like and cold hearted very fascinating,and the way Rei keps denying his feelings..I just hope everything will work out in the end,I`m a sucker for happy endings*grins insanely*well,please..DONt EVER stop writing this....I think I will hyperventilate if I dont get to read more of this brill story of yours......!

*yours truly,Kanilla***
person keisan
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Argggggggggggg!!!! Why can\'t he tell Kai he loves him??!!! Gods it\'s so frustrating knowing it and hearing him think it but he won\'t say it and it\'s driving me crazzzzzy!!!!! Arggggg!!! Hurry and update, please~
person Raenef
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEY ITS RAENEY! *glompskisseshugglescuddles then hits upside head* Why did you do that in the first part I almost died of a heart attack! Oh well still love ya hope you get well soooooon, and sorry I havent been updating.....dont really have a reason still got love for you! ^_^
person Blackrose
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent as usual. Hope Kai doesn\'t go and leave Ray. That\'s all he needs now. Hope Boris doesn\'t cause anymore trouble in Ray\'s time of need. Hope your wrist and arm get better soon. Looking forward to reading more.
person Arsinen
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG that was sappy but I still loved it. I hope Kai stays for Rei a little longer. Unless you really plan to end this fic as a tragedy of some sort. But hopwfully you don\'t. Well can\'t wait for your next update and I hope your arm gets better.^^
person Silver Rose Fox ^o^
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I. LIKE. IT. ALOT!!!!!!!!!!!
That was a nice trick you pull with Rei fathers.
I thought he was dead for a second there.
The story has been going very nicely....
I am very sorry that I have not review lately. Very sorry...................
Hope you update fast. Please.
Ho and by the way do you do know about Kyo Kara Moah? If you do can you make a story about
Yuuri and Wolfram? If yes I would be more then happy to tell you about it and give you ideas.
Anwser soon please.
Loving it.
A.K.A
Foxxy.^_* you know the rest.............
person Shitza
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lame, no! Great, yes! Please, update as soon as possible!!!

Shitza
person linkin89park89(you know me im lazy)
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it wuz a great chappy but u gata update with ur condition u shouldnt be leaving us at a cliffy, i cant wait to see what happens im torn between wanting kai to pursue his dream or stay for rei and he seriously needs to kick salimas ass shes so anoying ugh shes making me nuts im going to kill her myself if u dont. wait no i already have killed her 50000 times. love ya so much hope u get on msn soon otherwise send me an e-mail k, love ya gurl.
person Chibi Drigger
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW!!!! LOVED IT!!! T____T So cute...-sniff- Well....HOPE YOU GET BETTER SOON!!!! 0gives cookies and balloons- Well...can\'t wait for next update..but I guess I have to :P Well untill next chapter....

CIAO!!!! ^_^

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