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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person Incessant Darkness
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t care if they have to amputate your arm because you overused it as long as you finish this fic. No wait I\'m not that heartless, maybe you could call a friend and get them to type it while to speak. Meh anything as long as its the fastest way to get the next chapter up. Anyways I hope Kai leaves or something bad like that. I like sappy stories but it doesn\'t seem like the right time in the plot for it to be plausably sappy. So like get Kai hurt or let him leave or bring back an ex boyfriend or make it Wyatts (sp?) death day anniversary or something just as long as its sad because I think things have to get worse before they get better. Anyways keep up the good work and update soon.
person lemony_muffin
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG YAY!!!!!! THIS IS SOOOOOOOOO MY FAVE STORY HERE!!!!!! and AWWWWWWWWWWWWW thats SOOOO SWEET!!!! PLEASE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!! (DONT strain the hands so dont update unless ya REALLY CAN TYPE!!!!)
~*~Muffin~*~
person GS*
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow so many problems with ue wrist. >_< must really suk ass. XP well hope u get better and dont strain ur self. and when ever u get into a fight with i guy always remember ...kick and run, kick and run. XD.
person Kat-Lynn
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG cliff hanger!!lol
wow thats a really emotional chapter.Ihope everything gets better soon.
Twisted
Its got lots of twists.lol
person Crimson
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please let him be alive!!! Damn it, I don\'t understand why the heck it had to happen this way!??!?!?! What did my kitten ever do to you????? (Kai in the background: YOUR KITTEN?!??!?!?!) Why do you make his life so bad???? Why do you hate him so much!?!?!?!?! WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS??!?!?!?! You may be the author but if you ever make this a sad ending I swear I shall send my army of zombies after you!!!!!!!!

Ahem. Okay, now that I got that out, I can resume my review...

You really love to keep us waiting don\'t you? You just love ending in cliffies don\'t you?? WELL DON\'T YOU KNOW THAT CLIFFHANGERS ARE EVIL!??!?!?!!?!? Continue it already!!!!!! A lot of people are waiting for you to finish but no, you love to torture us!!!! WHY DO YOU TORTURE US SO MUCH?!?!?!?!?!? CONTINUE THIS!!!!! OR ELSE I\'M SENDING KAI AFTER YOU!!!!! AND YOU KNOW HOW SCARY HE GETS WHEN HE\'S ANGRY DON\'T YOU!?!?!?!?

Kai: And why would I follow your orders??

Crimson: Cause if you don\'t, I\'ll change the pairing for my fanfic and make it Rei/someone else who isn\'t Kai

Kai: Your wish is my command!!!!!!!

See, I told you I\'d sned Kai after you!!!! now, work on this or suffer his wrath upon my command!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!
person Shitza
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Morning, long time no see. Anyway, I loved last chapter, I really hope you have some Kai/Ray moment left. Second, I really hope you don\'t kill his father, you never know with you!

Shitza
person CJ
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey this story is the longest story i ever read and the best! on of my favorite stories ever u have real talent :)
person Cat in the web
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You injured your wrist?! Uh-oh. I think I speak for many readers when I want you to get better soon!
person cutenekojin
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! Poor you!! :( I hope that you get all better soon. And I can wait, I can wait till you, erm...your wrist gets better, and then you start writing once more and then I\'ll get to read and review once more. ^^

Well, get well, all uninjured, and yep! ^^
person kiotana
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry to here about your wrist but in a way i\'m glad(not glad your wrist is injured no! i want more chappy\'s) cause i won\'t be getting any computer time for three weeks due to my grandparents who don\'t have one...nine hour car ride so it\'s good bye till the 9th
well maybe you\'ll get some good ideas during your recuperation^^
get well soon*hugs*

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