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for Innocent Dance

by Might

schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please write more
person Anei
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How could you keep us hanging?
WHY?
*mutters something about stopping it to soon*
Nice story by the way ^.^
Hope you update very, very,very, *couple of hours later* Soon ^-^


Anei
person Chibi Drigger
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
T__T POOR KI SHOU!! -gives him big bandy- GET BETTER!!! -cries like chibi- (you know...with the shooty out tears) He CANNOT DIE!!! NAARRAAHH!!....If anything make his matha die...<<..>>..So mean I know....But Ki Shou is too cool to die!!!! :gonk: Well...Great chapter and yay for you ^_^ My exams start on the 17 -_-.....Well meh. Untill next chapter...CIAO!! ^_^
person Danya
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?!? you cruel cruel person...leaving me hanging like that....lol:P Continue soon...
Please let him live...hey I got an idea ..how about he does live but he doesn\'t remember anything...that could be why the doctor/nurse is a little sad:D
.....waaa I don\'t know I just want him to live..
person GS*
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O....be better b alive! but i think that is he does live he might not b able to dance anymore. but he better still b alive. *threatens* >_< wahhh! and i just realized. this is the 40th chapter. wow thats long. its like a whole series of and anime...seems like it. XD plz update soon! u and ur darn cliff hangers! I CURSE THEE!
person animeobsession
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNOOOOOOOO!!!!!! He can\'t be dead! That\'s too cruel!!!!!!! KEEP WRITING, DAMN YOU!
person Keisan
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I was like...CRYING! I can\'t believe you left that cliff-hanger!@! That really sucks~! Update really really quick!!! ;_;
person kiotana
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*skaking author violently*
i\'m crying my eyes out and you make the chapter short?!!! thats not fair!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Draza
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*is growling* you..are ..evil..INCARNATE!!!!YOU LEAVE IT THERE?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? HOW COULD YOU??????????????????????? *goes on rampage* ^.^; *throws random objects towards author*
person Kat
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...I think this is the first time I\'ve read something that\'s made me cry. >.<\" While reading the chapter, I couldn\'t help it. XD I think that proves that you\'re an awesome writer! Keep up the good work. ^^\"
Kat<3

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