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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person Chibi Drigger
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!!! -dies- My review didn\'t work T_T....-sighs- What the hell....
person Incessant Darkness
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are offically deadse. How could you even make us believe for a second that Rei was going to die. Argh I was so freaked, I would have been totally freaked if this fic totally ended up as a death fic, they\'re so depressive. Anyways that was a good chapter but it was so full I mean I get why Rei would want to kill himself. He\'s out of the production replaced by a guy who wanted to rape him, he has to marry a girl when he\'s claerly gay, his parents are acting weird. and to top it all of Kai is going to be leaving anytime now. Wow this is really getting sad, but keep up the good work. update soon.
person Shitza
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not angry, guess I have no big reason getting angry, after all in this fic, landing up with Salima can seem worse then death. Salima (here) sounds so bossy I\'d rather die if I were Ray. I only hope he and Kai will get together and that you won\'t kill him. I don\'t think you will, if you do then prepare for something worse then a flame. i can be really evil.

Oh, byt the way... look... finally have an account of my own. Yeah, know it took time to get one, I am sooo lazy.

Shitza
person HeArT
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE DAMNIT UPDATE PLZZZZZ!!!!!!! AHHH!
SO....DAMN.....DESPERATE...... X.X...
PLZ MAKE THIS PAIN GO AWAY AND UPDATE!!! IVE BEEN WAITING SOOO LONG...
UR BUSY WORK BETTER BE OVER SOON! U NEED A BREAK AND U NEED TO UPDATE THIS FIC!!
I HATE CLIFF HANGERS!! WHAA!!
IM SOOOOOOO ANXIOUS TO KNOWWWW!! PLZ UPDATE..!!
(PUPPY DOG EYES, POUTING.) O.o?
THAT HAVE BETTER WORKED AT LEAST A BIT. :P :( :) YAY!
FROM AN ARTIST AND AUTHOR: HeArT <3
OH YA AND I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE UR FIC...BUT I THINK U KNOW THAT AFTER WHAT U JUST READ FROM ME, AINT I JUST DA WEIRDEST?:P LOL.
person crimson
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You\'re going to give me a heart attack!!!! I can\'t breath, I\'m hyperventilating!!!!! I can feel an asthma attack coming on!!!!!! Don\'t you dare kill Rei off!!!! Please, I\'m begging! DON\'T!!!!!! Why do you do this to him!!! What has he ever done to you!!?!?!??!?!?! WHY DO YOU HATE HIM SO MUCH!??!?!?!?!?!? Now that I am done freaking out all I want to say is: DUDE, I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!! I\'m so glad you finally updated!!!!!! History is to repeat itself....Wyatt and Rei...tsk, tsk, tsk. Ne, please do me this little favor: let Rei get run over but please don\'t kill him off. I want to see all their reactions when they find out that Rei got run over. Especially Kai, Tala, Raul and Boris. Oh, and please don\'t let him end up with Salima.
person Tsuki Seishin
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
0_0 Oooo I can\'t wait for the next chappie *glomps* so dramatic and angsty!! Oh, I have started to write again ^^; you kinda inspired me too *grins* please put the next chappie up soon!!! ~Tsuki
person Fantasy
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*puts hands over chest* You about gave me a heartattack! GAWD, I thought you really did say the end, otherwise I would have been one angry reader. But don\'t worry, I won\'t kill you ^^ Can\'t speak for anyone else though, CRUEL JOKE! CRRRUUUEEELLLLL!!!!!!! *.*
person D.S.
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You had beter not kill Rei! I don\'t think you will but don\'t even consider it. Man you really know how to make people want to kill you! I hope that you have some excllent doctors close to your house! If you update soon though you might survive. I hope you do because I really want to know what happens next! Great though, only problem was that you had a few grammar and spelling mistakes. That was the only thing I found to critisize, everything else is great! Well once again, I hope you update soon and survive all the angry readers! See ya!
person fireandice
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Squeals Happily and bounces around like an idiot* I can\'t believe you finally updated. I thought you had lost your spark and just left us hanging in the wind their for a moment... but... NO... your back and with an amazing chapter. I can\'t believe how strange and oddly self-centred Rei is acting. Kai loves him so much and he can\'t see it. The ending... oh the ending. Your an evil human being you know that... you really are... If you kill Rei I will... I will... * picks up bloody knife from the floor and runs after author* I\'ll kill you.
Update ASAP... and I mean it... or your dead.
person GS*
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dot dot dot. *blink blink* thats such a lovely way to end a chapter. *twitch twitch* well anyway. i think Kai might apear out of no where and u know save him/ push him out of the way. orr the truck would stop just a few inches away and he faints or something.XP
but i think Rei was getting a bit annoying. he complains too much. but i just think that Rei wants his parents to just b parents like yell at him or something thing. XP i dun know. but then i felt sry 4 him. ahh mixed emotions. :P.
oh and i hope u feel better!!... wow ear& throat infection. and u have a art project. i shall pray 4 u. lol. haha but u\'ll get it done in time. have FAITH!!! WILL POWER!!!!!!! ....yea... >_<

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