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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person Hikaru_chan_4ever
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I REALLY THOUGHT THAT WAS THE END! GRR! Please continue real sooN! ~Chan
person NekoJenn
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo! I hope Rei gets hit! And Kai too! That\'d be great...
person kiotana
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you better dodge!!!!
kai better save his sorry as!!!!!!!
or he\'s gonna wake in a hospital disapointed that he didn\'t die and yet so close to death since he might be paralized....
lock yourself in a room ray and think things through for yourself!! feel the need to be held by your true lover!!!
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello again. this chappy was so sad and i feel bad for both of them i mean rei\'s just confused. maybe they want him to go to colledge with kai? i duno well ill be gone the next 3 days so it gives u a chance to get me offa ur back. i love the story and i hopefully can talk to u later cyas
person brenan
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what the hell was that nakaka asar ka!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sana di mo nlng ginawa yung kwento sinayang mo lng
ang ganda pa nmn tapos ganun lng ang katapusan?!
amp ka!!!!!!!!!!!!!
if you want to know what i wrote learn to speak in filipino!
person Anon
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah! how could you do that to Rei-Rei?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!!!! This better turn out OK in the end *shakes fist at auther* and you had better update sooner *another shake of fist*
person Kat-chan
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I usually don\'t review on adultfanfiction.net, but...I\'ve been reading your fics for a while now, and this is definately worth the review. I mean, all the chapters are worth the review. I\'ve just been too lazy. XD It would be sad...if you had ended it there. Please try to update soon. ^^\"
Kat<3
person J.S.
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god
dat was sooo horrible...i thought u were going 2 leave it at dat
dank god i strolled down
update soon
and if rei dies, there will b a angry mob at ur doorstep witin da hour



btw...nice chappie, poor rei though
person Faith
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Evil! >< you made me think that was the end! evil! >< Well not realyl good of you to keep going *pats* Though try not to wait so long this time ^^ I like chapters of this story 1st one this long I have stuck with.
person Arsinen
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAHHHHHH! NO HOW DARE YOU LEAVE IT IN SUCH A PLACE! AHH! I CAN\'T BELIEVE YOU DID THAT! *Takes a breath and calms down* okay I\'m calm now. Please update soon like tomorrow soon i can\'t stand the suspense of what will happen to Rei please update WAAHHH! okay anyways grea chappie and see ya around.

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