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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person dark-anime-slave
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awh man, reiz zo fcked! i dont no y riez tryin to hd the gay thing, everyone zeemz to b alright with it, welll not mizz b!tchy...but who carez about her???.....and wat about kai???poor kai.... lozin both the poeple he lvz to a car crazh....
person Ray 4 Ever
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 39 was hilarious and sad, a most weird mixture. Update. I want to see what happens. Ray and Tala better make up. *pouts* *looks thoughtful* One other thing. You made a reference about Garland not knowing about Kai and Ray. But he was there when Ray asked Kai to make love to him after Boris made him cum. Garland already knew. I thought I would let you know. tootles.
person Ray 4 Ever
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 39 was hilarious and sad, a most weird mixture. Update. I want to see what happens. Ray and Tala better make up. *pouts* *looks thoughtful* One other thing. You made a reference about Garland not knowing about Kai and Ray. But he was there when Ray asked Kai to make love to him after Boris made him cum. Garland already knew. I thought I would let you know. tootles.
person Ray 4 Ever
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 39 was hilarious and sad, a most weird mixture. Update. I want to see what happens. Ray and Tala better make up. *pouts* *looks thoughtful* One other thing. You made a reference about Garland not knowing about Kai and Ray. But he was there when Ray asked Kai to make love to him after Boris made him cum. Garland already knew. I thought I would let you know. tootles.
person Maisa_angel
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I could kill u for leaving chapter 39 like that. But, I will forgive you if you don\'t let Rei get hit please. Anyways, I love your story and the way you have brought it about be including other characters in the series as well as some OCs. So keep up the good work, so I won\'t start throwing things at you along with the other angry readers.
person Blackrose
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor Ray. Hasn\'t he suffered enough. Bet Kai comes. Hopefully Tyson. Not Boris or Salima though. Hate those two. Looking forward to reading more. MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!
person Faith
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* I thought there be another chapter watting when I arvied home.... Oh well ^^ you will put it up soon enough
person dark-anime-slave
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
zhez a lil bitch!!!!!!!!!!!
person Shitza
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drops Salima in a tree*

There, that should do it.

Salima: Ray! help me!
Me: Bitch!
Ray: huh?
Salima: RAAAAAAAAAAAY! HEEEEELP!!!!!!!!!!
Me: Shut up! Kai, take Ray away from here!
Kai and Ray: *walk away*
Me: Now, I\'ll handle you!

Back to reality

Uhm, sorry, my evil thoughts. Okay, Salima usually don\'t get on my nerves, even if she is a bit too much goodie goodie girl. Come on, let the GUYS be together and let that GIRL out from this story. Love it though, can\'t get enough of it!

Lol Shitza
person GS*
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AGHH!!!!!!!! OMG!!!! Salima!!! she better not do anything or i\'ll hit her with a car! bwahahahahah! >D
it was shoo sweet though. i can just c the scene in my head. Kai hugging Rei. it;d b a better feel if it started to thunder once Salima was at the door way watching. lol. XP
ahh cant wait till next chappi! XD

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