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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person Anon
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love love love where this is heading!!!!
person Cat in the web
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ray`s parents are crazy. But not as crazy as Salima is. And Ray and Kai are both selfish, but at least Kai is now a little wiser and told Ray about his feelings. When Ray tells himself and Kai the truth about his feelings too then we will have a happy end.
Well, I think I like Ray`s mother a little now, she seems to be a Yaoi-fan.
person Tsaphiel
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey keep the story going this one is the best I\'ve read so far. You\'re great so keep it up I can\'t wait for the next Chapter.
person Ray 4 Ever
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like always update. And thanks for puting in Jin/Brooklyn
person LaDiNi
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*teary eyes* wow, poor Kai that\'s so sad! And Rei... don\'t marry Salima!!!!
Update, I wanna know what she\'ll do!
person kiotana
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhaahahahahaha!!!!! noooo! update asap!!!NOW!!!!
die salima!!! DIE!!!!
person yoroshiku
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finally!!! another chapter!!! and thank god kai likes rei!!! i don\'t think i could stand the fact that reio was engaged...
person Arsinen
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh evil Salima I like a lot ^_^ Just don\'t hurt my Rei physically if she does something. I can\'t wait for the next chapter i have a feeling it\'s going to be badass^^ That one bit with Kai and Rei made wanna cry it was so sweet but at the same time very deppressing Kai telling his relationship with Wyatt and how he died it was very sad *tear* well can\'t wait for what\'s left of the fic hope you finish whatever assignments you have left so you can update faster. until next time ^_^
person Chibi Drigger
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWW!!! You almost had MEE CRYING!! WAAAA!!!!! Heh...I loves it!!! -grins and gives flowers- Good job...I highly apreciate your updates!! ^_^ Please...again soon. Ciao!!
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really hope u update soon this wuz a great chapter and dont hurry yourself to finish the story it would be a shame for you to rush the story and have it not turn out as well as it could. the story has a ton of potential

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