AFF Fiction Portal
GroupsMembersexpand_more
person_addRegisterexpand_more

rate_review Reviews

for Innocent Dance

by Might

person D.S.
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Nice job. You really are a master at torture! Just don\'t go off killing Rei!(Salima id ok, but not Rei! *huggles Rei plushy*) Hope that you will update soon! See ya!
person Akela
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
if that bitch does a thing, i\'ll rip her a new asshole.
person Faith
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*siniffles* I been waiting for 2 or 3 days now for chapter 38 T_T please hurry so good want to reed more! ^^
person Cat in the web
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The end of this chapter is great! Go, Kai! I don`t like Ray`s mother but his father seems to be okay! And Salima is in for the shock of her life!
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey another awsome chapter i havnt been on as much recently finals are killer i have 3 math finals next week 2 language 4 spanish 2 science and 2 social studies its insane. well i hope you update soon or drop me a line on my e mail.
person maria
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
alrite ya updated! great chapter. update next chapter soon.
person GS*
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo yay! ur back!!!!!!! *rejoices* lol. this chappi was sweet. awwww. lol. hehe.hmm. i would buy iy if i had a credit car or wut ever it is lol. XP. and good luck with all ur reports,art work ect. lol. have will power!!!!!!!!!! yea!!!!!!!!
person Danya
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROFL That was AWESOME...lol I couldn\'t stop laughing...great chapter... can\'t wait to see what happens next:D
person Ray 4 Ever
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 37 was hilarious but I still want more Jin/Brooklyn scenes. MORE, MORE, MORE!
person kiotana
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
REVILATIONS!!!!!
i loved this chapter!
Note to self: this is chapter 37

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?