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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person Draza
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! at least Rei\'s father knows!! it\'s one step..wonder how his mom will react...? ok i have a challenge for you....write an extra long story!!! you aren\'t obliged to do it but you kept us in suspense (yes i know it wasn\'t your fault...damn internet) just make it like...say...another 6-8 paragraphs long...kk? you can if you want to, no gun at your head.....
person GS*
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHH! u sho evil!!!!!! nou!!!!!!!! wahhh.*sniff sniff*
lol. well i like the chappi. lol. i waish i was in the story so i could meet Dong Bang shin ki. their sho kool. lol. XP
but if u had Shinhwa i;d prob go crazy. lol. i just wish that there would b no more suspences. \'n\'. lol. oh and good luck on all ur exams!
person HikariDon
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my, god! You poor, poor, thing! Having the net taken away! *hugs you so tight* I haven\'t been on here for ages, and because of coursework and exams I haven\'t been on msn as early... ;.;

But, that chapter rocked! Seriously! Rei is so ... so... noble, trying to do what\'s right for his family. But now that his Papa knows... this is going to get very interesting. I still stand by wanting his Mama to act like a crazed-fangirl (Cheri-sama XD!!), that would rock some serious socks! But, Kai!! Poor lamb, being all upset. However, he might just understand *why* Rei did it... because... yeah. Anyway... Rei\'s Papa should have \"the talk\" with Kai, and then make them marry... OH! Rei could wear a dress...

I\'m rambling now, ne? ... ^^; Gomen-nasai! Mou, but I hope you can find a way to get online again. Our college computers don\'t let us onto AFF.net... I tried... it\'s blocked ^^;; Eheh, anyway, I should be in bed (oops) I have classes in the morning. Hope that you get your internet back soon, sweetie.

Lots of Lovvu
HikariDon

xxx
person Astrid
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*jumps up and down from utter exitement* OMG how do you friggin\' do that?? Every time I read the new chapters I get more and more hooked! *dashes to Kai and gives him a big bear hug* Ow poor Kai please don\'t let him suffer too much and let Rei PLEASE gain back his senses. Our lil\' chinese just knows he can\'t live without his Kai ^.^ *gives Kai another hug and gets smacked on the head by a pissed off Rei*
person Arsinen
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I\'m reviewing I need an update god it\'s just been too long without an update. Waahhh! Anyways I found somevery hot picsof Gackt I\'ll send when You update *waves pics in Warrior\'s face* ooh i wonder what Rei\'s dad is going to do? Better yet what will Kai do and even better will Rei throw another tantrum? Anyways whatever see ya when you update. ^_^
person O.o
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
[“I was just saying that in order to stay here. I have no lover.”
“Really?”
“Really.” He gave her a small smile and in return he got a tight hug.
“I’m glad…” She whispered. He began to rub the small part of her back and then he looked up to see Kai with the same look only with a hint of hurt. The dual hair turned away and walked off. ]

That last line, wrenched my gut. What. A fucking. Coward, your Rei can be.
Good chapter. Pulls things together.

person Nikki-Lynn
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa.I was like so hyper and now i\'m bummed.*scratches head*Anyways love ur fic an i really hope you will make another chapter soon and MAKE KAI AND REI TOGETHER!!!!!!!!!OR I\"LL THROW A TORCH AT YOU!!





sorry..........
luff yeh
person Anon
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! MWA HAHAHHA! I love the ending, with Rei\'s dad. Poor Rei. And Kai. *sniffles* *glares at Author* HOW DARE YOU LEAVE US IN SUSPENSE! UPDATE SOON! Thanks, i\'m on the verge of typing the next part of one of my stories, and i needed a little break. this was just what i needed/ ^.^ ARIGATO!
person Hikaru-chan-4ever
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoops. .i forgot my name. .heheh. . neways. .Thanks again. i must go finish my chapter. please update soon. . life sucks man. hope u can your internet time back. . or. . hope the problem is fixed. BYE!
person Dark-anime-slave
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg!!!....i cant remeber wa i waz going to zay??

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