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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person Cat in the web
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that is such a sad and beautiful chapter! But I`m almost afraid to read what you will write next. Poor Kai and poor Ray.
Well, it was interesting to read that Garland was a pupil to Ray`s parents. And when Salima visits Ray I hope she will fall in love with another one (it can be Boris for all I care).
person kiotana
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter!!!!! i love emotional crap like that!!!...lol...plz update soon and how can i see the pic of ray?.....anyway...plz update soon cause i want to know how rei\'s parents are going to take things...you know being gay ....and a lot of gay friends...where does garland intend on taking rei if he intends to or something...europe too?!...i hope....
person kiotana
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay not liking the pic of rei....seriously...if only i could scan my pic...grrr!!!! stupid printer/scanner/photo copier
person Hikaru_chan_4ever
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWW. . that was soooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sighs* i luvs it! Update soon! okay! I can\'t WAIT to see what happens. . .
person Draza
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww.....poor kai....*watches kai cry*...he..he showed...EMOTION!!!!!! X_X Oh i have a question!!!*waves hand in the air and is suddenly sitting at a desk* Ummm....why does it put KW in the dance-game-thingy (don\'t know the name)? I haven\'t figured it out yet...unless it was kai/wyatt or something like that....i\'m probably WAY off aren\'t i? XD
person Chibi Drigger
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww....I nearly almost cried!!! TT__TT I really love this fic!!! -nods and gives you chocolates and roses!!!- Well please update soon!! BYE!!
person GS*
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww. this chappi was sad. T_T. Kai cried! awwww.
but i\'m wondering if Rei\'s parents will enroll him into the same school Kai\'s going too. that\'ll b cool. lol
oo and that gurl\'s gonna come. wahahaha. Kai\'s gonna b blown away!
and the pic was really nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! shooo pretty. but some how i imanged a green colored dress or something like that. lol. but non the less goregous!lol
up date shoon! n_n
person Shitza
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh damn hell,. you started this fic, you continue this fic! Sorry for the bad language, but I\'ve been reading so long now I think i\'ve picked the bad words on the way.

person Arsinen
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my this was so emotional. You made me cry it takes a lot for a fic to get the water works going but this chapter brought tears to my eyes. Bravo for such a good chapter. I\'ll get to sending T.M Revolution to you k? See ya next time I\'ll send you 1TYM. *Grin*
person Fantasy
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO cute!!! But sad T,T!!

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