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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person kiotana
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 have all the cookies you want ....JUST UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!poor kai!!!rays engaged....and poor ray!!!! kai\'s still leaving!!!!!!!are they meant to be appart?!plz say it isn\'t so!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
person Chibi Drigger
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha! Cookies? xDD -throws cookies at you for energy to write more- THERE! Cookies! Hahha! Well I loved it (kinda dissapointed rei didnt get raped though but meh). uhhhhm...yeah. please update soon!! CIAO! -Cd
person GS*
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg wow! rei and a girl?! lol. wowkai is in 4 a big surprise! i c angst! lol. . wow wut a turn of events! cant wait till the next chppi!!!!!!!!!!!! agh!
person crazy nek0-JIN
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well...at least it\'s not Mao XD Then I\'d probably go on and on and on about how much I hated Rei/Mao. Hehe.

I actually like Rei/Salima to a certain, strange extent. BUT NO. KAIREI FOREVER!!! I hope Kai gets jealous. Really REALLY jealous. *cackles*

Loved the scene between Rei and Boris. So...actiony!!! And I love how you portray Rei n.n I mean, I\'m sure I\'d cry if I was about to get raped. Geez. *patpat* I can\'t wait till the next chapter!!! n.n
person maria
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
alrite ya updated. great chapter. update next chapter soon.
person Draza
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!! KAI TO THE RESCUE!!! XD hehehe...well, at least this cliffie is better than your other ones! So as a reward....COOKIES!!!!!! *throws random cookies into the air*
person Neko-Jenn
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! I\'m not great at doing reviews, but I thought you should know I appriciate you :P
person nicki
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is so great sorry i just got a chance to read the last three chapts so but they are great dont stop writing k
person D.S.
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well at least you didn\'t tourture me too much this time. So for now...no more sharp objects!^_^ You should feel lucky! But i honestly can\'t wait for the next chapter! So hurry up or I\'ll bring the sharp objects back! XD Well anyways I\'m glad that you updated so fast with this chapter! Yay*does a happy dance* Update soon cuz I\'m sure that everyone else reading this story wants to find out what happens next! So we\'ll be waiting.
person Kuroneko_hikage
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooo! *Thwaps her head repeatedly onto desk* Salima *thwap* belongs *thwap* to Kane! *thwap thwap thwap*

Rei should be engadged, yes, but only to KAI! *Just finished watching a bunch of second season eps*

You are so evil! >.< I swear, if you don\'t fix this.... *Takes out her Hentai Master Frying Pan of Doom once more* You are soooo going to be sorry! XD

*Pats head* Aside from a few grammars, this fic, overall, is great! ^.^ *Thumbs up* Keep it up!

-Hentai Master Dee-Kun

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