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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person FlamesAngel
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHATS KAI GONNA SAY???! WHATS GONNA HAPPEN!??! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!
person Cat in the web
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You really are the queen of torture, but before you are proud of it, you should think about it: the life of the queen of tortur is a very dangerous one...
-sigh- You really are not done torturing Ray and your readers, are you? But I think Ray should toughen up a bit (did I wrote that right?). Sitting in the rain like that... And Salima? She is a nice girl, but when she tries to get Ray she will have many enemys, one of them me. And his parents - I have a feeling I will not like his parents.
I hope that you will at least have a little pity with Ray, so that he will do good in this dance production of Garland.
person Fantasy
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok.... I\'m DEFINATLY PISSED NOW!
person Arsinen
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*GLare* well at least you updated and fast here I give a chocolate cake as a reward. And if you update within the next two or three days I will personally wrap T.M. Revolution and give them to you as a present for updating and making the chapter really good.K? Okay well We\'ll see if you update see ya.
person keisan
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol, wow, for once it\'s not Mao lol! Amazing. Wonder how the \'rents are gonna deal with Rei\'s...preference...hmm. Wonder how Salima will deal hehehe. That\'ll be funny and oh Kai...poor naive little Kai...doesn\'t know what\'s gonna hit him. Update soon. Glad Rei wasn\'t raped...that wouldn\'t have been nice.
person hikaru_chan_4ever
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*is frozen in shock of the sudden twist* //*thinks* and i thought I was evil. . . THIS PERSON IS CRUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!//

*a few hours later* *is still in shock* //*thinks*. . . i guess i can only hope that she can read my mind. . READ MY MIND DARNIT! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! . . . . .. .. . . .. . . . WHAT IF SHE CAN\"T READ MY MIND! I\"M SCREWED! Noooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! . . .all well. . i\'ll just sit here then*//

*still sitting in shock, only now, left eye is twitching. . *
person keisan
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Kai better get there....arg. Why is Rei so vulnerable all the time? I mean really... Just sack him and get the hell out of there. Rei\'s a lot stronger than you\'ve made him out to be. *sigh* update soon...must see what happens.
person Chibi Drigger
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WoOt!!! xDD I personally don\'t know if you read my review or not and if you came up with platnum head on your own! But if it came from my review Im glad you used it! -grins- Made my day..:P My suggestions never get used so -shrugs- But meh! ^_^ Absolutly great chapter! Hm....I think...Before I might have thrown something at you....but....a one-shot I\'m writing...it\'s having Rei getting raped aswell..^^;;.....-shifty eyes-...But yeah. ENough of my rambling. I really really liked the chapter and it\'s just a plain out great fic!! ^_^ Sooo...PLEASE UPDATE SOOON!!! THANKS!! -grins- Untill next chapter....CIAO!...-Cd
person crazy nek0-JIN
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RAPE *.* Eeee, I really hope something happens this time XD I dunno, I\'m evilly sadistic like that. Normally, I\'m not the hugest fan of rape scenes...but you do it so well! It\'s like...so sadistically...sadistic. Your portrayal of Boris is so evil yet suave and sophisticated. It\'s like wow. The 28th chapter put dirtay BorisRei scenes in my head and I was accidentally doodling them in class XD

Mmm, I\'m glad you\'re updating so quickly now <3 I\'m so happy and ecstatic!!! Eee, in ever since the whole maid-thing, I\'ve been wanting to draw Rei in one of those uniforms, since I haven\'t done so in a while. Once I\'m finished colouring it, I\'ll send it to you n.n

Can\'t wait for more <3
person Fantasy
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOOOOOWWWW DDDAAARRREEEE YOU!!! *throws every dangerious item around at flame warrior* MORE MORE!

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