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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person GS*
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol. good point. if we kill u then there will b no story. smart.
but yea. i was thinking of that old dude. lol. that kinda freaked me out a bit. *shivers*
but y is it always behind a tree. dont people thinks thats a bit creepy?...lol i would.
but hope fully Boris or bryan wont mess things up. poor rei. \'n\'
onward with the story!
person kiotana
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chappie...and with so many people lieing its hard to stay on the same path.....plz use brian in the story cause i keep having to remind myself...oh and i won\'t harm you if you update everyday*big smiles* if not i can\'t garante anything*evil*does kai care or not...he\'s getting on my nerves...and i love kai!!!!!!! but how can you keep things away from the ones you love??? i don\'t understand...MAKE THIS GOOD....ER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person kiotana
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU!!!update by tomorrow or die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!DIEDIEDIEDIEDIEDIEDIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Draza
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thankyou for elaborating on your Boris/Bryan name....i was confused...not hard when you\'ve got a cold. I\'d throw something...but i seriously don\'t have the energy....
person Cat in the web
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! My heartrate is finally back to normal. Chapter 29 was all what I could ask for! It was really good and I forgive you now. But if you write something like chapter 28 again, you surely will give your readers a heartattack (me first!). But I have a feeling that will not be the last time Ray has to suffer. So I agree with one of the reviewers before me (I think Fantasy is her name): You are evil!
PS: Don`t forget to make Julia pay for what she did!
person Raenef
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Ya its Rae again i think you story is going great so far buuuuuut. WHY the hell did you have to put evil bastard Boris in here i mean it was great WITHOUT him. *sobs LOUDLY*
person Chibi Drigger
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-laughs-..Torture..Haha!..Yeah. :P Anyway. Great chapter and its fine it was late! -nods- Uhhm...Broris\'s hair...Well you could call it lavender?..I mean...It was first season..But still..-shifty eyes- He was better looking in season one...Heh. But yeah. You could call it grey...-shrugs-...or platnum?..Or chrome...heh. THeres this kid in my class and me and my best friend both call him \'Platnum Head\' because he has this really shiney hair. haha. But yeah. thats just my stu;pid little suggestion. please update soon. ciao -cd
person Kitty
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heyhey, do you mean Boris like the Japanese version of Bryan? Or the ugly old dude trying to take over the world? I\'m just wondering because I haven\'t been able to figure it out. Nic chappie anyways!! Keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope i know whats gonna happen...kai to the rescue!!!! we need another kai rei lemon...soooooonnnnn!!!!! please please please
person Laney
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh no..where\'s kai going????? i hope this is not a sad ending..i will DIE :(

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