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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person hoshicat
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes oh my god he needs to say yes!!!!! not to mention a wedding would make a very fine ending!!! i love this story it is my absolute fav!!!!!!! plz update soon!!!!!! ~Hoshicat ^_^
person Kiotana
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch.55
You have no idea how much I missed this fic...and now this!*indicated the proposal scene*
That is SO sudden. I knew it was getting corny for a minute there! You know...I want the cookie, but I liked this chapter more^^
Well since you make everything so dramatic I can just assume Ray is going to take his sweet time thinking about it and wondering what to reply, or he says yes then thinks it's too sudden, or says no and Kai gets upset...Drama in every direction.
There are more options...these are just most likely XD
In any case! Try not to make it so mind bottling for poor Reirei; he's got a lot of stuff on his mind...plus there's still Boris to talk about. *short attention span glitch* I can't wait for the wedding!(if there is one) I wonder if they'll get Ray in a gown XD That wouldn't be right. Poor Ray should be happy on this day!
Rambblerambblerambble
Kai: Just keep writing...-_-
person KitCat
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!!! I've been waiting sooo long for you to come back *stays tuned for the next update*
person danya
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey a few weeks???
I'm really trying to be patient... but its not working:P
Please upated soon!!!
person yaoifan
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome!!!!!! ^_^
person yaoifan
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome!!!!!! ^_^
person Arsinen
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes I'm so glad you didn't take a very long Hiatus. PLease please update soon I'll be waiting okay and I'll check every single day to see if you've updated. Well see ya until you update.
person Kiotana
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
We'll be waiting^^
person Incesant_Darkness
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
actually to tell you the truth my interest for beyblade died off a little muchto my sorrow but occasionally I check up on the section. Let me tell you I am absolutely estatic to see that you're back. Doesn't matter how long you take, just know that I will never give up on this fic.

- Incessant_Darkness
person gina
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! can't wait for the next chapter!

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