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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person kiotana
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*evil laugh* that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!lol lol lol lol lol i love to torture kai!!!! besides he got his fun.
....maybe he\'ll keal over and break the stupid bet....nah*more evil laughs*UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this week of torture is torturing me....its great, i just hope it doesn\'t last too long...bc i can\'t last too much long!!!
person Anon
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh Wow....i love the dirty talk... i hope there is more to come!!
person GS*
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really liked how u made the \"break\" up. everybody wins! n_n
and 1tyme\'s song Hot is a bit werd. they cursed a lot in the beginging. it made me laugh a lot. XP
yay and now Rei and Kei r offically 2gether! woohoo!
but wow Raul! naughty boy!Tala moves fast dosent he? lol. heheh.
hmm i guess Rei might win cause its gonna b a hard to get situation. lol. XP
cant wait 4 the next chappi!!!! yay! n_n
person linkin89park89
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this ficcy is beautiful plz e-mail me i would love to talk to you. i really hope ur going to continue writing it.
person Fantasy
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You and your cliffies...
person kiotana
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
COOL A BATTLE FOR SEX!....sorta..lol..make the details for suspense. this is going to be awesome!!!!!YAY!!!!!
person evilchild (not signed in)
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a good thing! I\'m glad Raul confessed. Now Rei can fuck Kai all he want without feeling bad for it! This story\'s going to kick it up a few notches since Rei doesn\'t have to pussyfoot around any more!! I can\'t wait to read the next chapter!!!
person keisan
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!!! GO REI~! Finally he got some guts and semi-fixed his out of control life! YEAH REI!!! Wow, like all that shit that\'s been happening is somewhat balancing out...wow, must\'ve been nice to have an easy way out of something for once- his and Raul\'s unfaithful relationship for one. Hopefully he wins this volleyball match but I have a nagging feeling that if he does he\'ll be the one that won\'t want to leave Kai alone hehe...the tables have turned...well hopefully anyway. *crosses fingers hoping predictions will be correct* Update soon!
person Lisa
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, i like how u change rei...its alot.....sexier!!! please update soon

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