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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person Chibi Drigger
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME! AWSOME AWSOME!!! MORE! MORE!! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!! xDDDD PLEASE!! MORE SOON!!!

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person Draza
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woohoo!! *does funky dance* go Rei! teach that baka whose boss!!!
person J.S.
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hurrary u updated!!!
im glad raul found some1 since i kinda felt sorry 4 him
i just cant wait 2 find out if rei will actually win (for once)
well i hope u update soon
person Hikaru_chan_4ever
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*glomps* YOU MUST CONTINUE! YOU MUST YOU MUST! I LUV IT! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *whoops for joy* Please continue soon.
person GabZ
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
emmm, I think this is my fav chapter
Maybe because Raul is not an obstacl anymore
and I think Rei is going to loose
finally thing are getting better for Rei
person Silver Rose Fox
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now we are getting it on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay, for once I read the author note.
You ask if the Raul telling thing was all right.
I think is more then all right, it\'s great.
You also did say that you are going to focus on two main things.
1. Rei and Kai thing
2. Rei hard to get thing
I think this will spice up the story for the readers taste buds.
Since Rei is in this story is very girl in the middle. ( in boy form)
I think this\"I win the volley ball game,you have to leave me alone for a week\" is the first
step for our little Rei.^_^
But now am left wondering.
So lets put two and two together.
If Rei does win the game and Kai leave him alone for aweek,
during spring break week what will happen to Kai?
And why not make things alittle hard for our dear old Kai.
Since Rei is playing hard to get after all.
Ok, I have to go now.
I love how this story is going.^o^
So keep it up.
Update soon please.
A.K.A
Foxxy.^_*
person Silver Rose Fox
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now we are getting it on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay, for once I read the author note.
You ask if the Raul telling thing was all right.
I think is more then all right, it\'s great.
You also did say that you are going to focus on two main things.
1. Rei and Kai thing
2. Rei hard to get thing
I think this will spice up the story for the readers taste buds.
Since Rei is in this story is very girl in the middle. ( in boy form)
I think this\"I win the volley ball game,you have to leave me alone for a week\" is the first
step for our little Rei.^_^
But now am left wondering.
So lets put two and two together.
If Rei does win the game and Kai leave him alone for aweek,
during spring break week what will happen to Kai?
And why not make things alittle hard for our dear old Kai.
Since Rei is playing hard to get after all.
Ok, I have to go now.
I love how this story is going.^o^
So keep it up.
Update soon please.
A.K.A
Foxxy.^_*
person blu_dragon
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the story so far. its one of my faves. lol. i hope u make it to where rei wins the volley ball match to put kai it his place for a while. but since kai cant bother him. i also hope that u get rei to tease the hell out of him to for the week. so he knows how it feels lol. ne ways pls update soon.
person Cat in the web
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a great idea to make Raul confess to Ray! And it was funny how Ray tried to do it. I like to read about Kai`s reaction to the news. And I hope Ray doesn`t do to badly in the game. Maybe he can beat Kai, or at least make Kai sweat?
person nicki
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN YOU how dare you do that leave me in a cliffy like that i want to know what happens so EMAIL ME WHEN YOU UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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