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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person GS*
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow.Rei\'s a bit slow isnt he?lol. well i dont really think Kai\'s being cold hearted...just truth full...except 4 all the threating stuff.....yea. well hopefull everything would b cleared out! yay! n_n
person Silver Rose Fox
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I was out so long.I had this huge test for a week for seven hours a day.
I think my brain is fry.(extra fry.)
My friends told me not to over do it while studing.^_^\"
Well now for the story.
I SO LOVE IT. I really don\'t know what going to happen next.
And also I love the hang clife.^_^ Right time.
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Please UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Because this story is getting good.
And please make Rei see the light . Make him hard to get.To tell kindly to Raul,to just be friends.
Make him work hard in everything. And make sure that Kai wants Rei since he dump both of them
but Rei plays hard to get. Or something like that, okay.?
Well got to go see ya..
A.K.A
Foxxy.^_* P.S Made my nickname shorter, but it is still Silver Rose Fox.^o^\"\"\"
person Chibi Drigger
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww...Kai no evil!! ^_^..Or cold...He\'s just smart~!! I agrees with Kai!! -taps temple- Rei is stupid cold-hearted one!! God damned jack-ass!!...-sighs shaking head-..I startein to think that \'idiot\' is probably an even better first name than Rei. Heh. Idot Kon..-giggles- Anyway. Really great chapter and can\'t wait to see..er...read more!! ^_^ So untill next chapter...

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-Cd
person J.S.
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
U REALLY AM UMPRESSED WITH HOW OFTEN U UPDATE DA STORY. I THINK IT IS REALLY COOL AND I CAN\'T WAIT TO READ DA NEXT CHAPTER!!! XXX
person Cd
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great!! ^_^ I liked it and please more sooooooon!! :P..Sorry..I\'n kinda hyper. But really good and cant wat for more.

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-Cd
person keisan
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
;_; Awww....I think I\'m starting to see Kai\'s point....aww and I swore I\'d never turn my back on Rei. So sad. But for sure, he\'s gotta get a grip on things...fix his life up cause he\'s gonna lose everything if he keeps on the way he\'s going now. Yeah that\'s my lil\' imput...awesome fic, good chapter, Rei\'s gotta sort stuff out-Kai\'s his wakeup call, a very abrupt wakeup call. Hehe...Rei-Rei\'s dense...
person Cat in the web
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As I wrote in my last review: poor Ray! It will not be easy to break up with Raul. Hopefully Ray will get help from Tala. And I hope for once that Julia, the overprotective sister, will shut up! I don`t like her in this story.
person dani
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMGOMG!
It took me like, 2 nights to read all of it but it was SO worth it!
Wow, you\'re an amazing writer and I\'m glad my friend recommended this fic to me!
LOVED the lemon scenes, and I especially love Kai! Even if he\'s a cruel bastard! ^^;;
Loved it to bits, looking forward to the next chapter!!! XD
<3
person keisan
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I just started reading this fic today and I haven\'t been able to stop. I found a link for it at livejournal at the kaixrei community and wow. It\'s really really good. I love how involved it\'s gotten and all in 3rd person pov- consistantly. Awesome. I like the little subplots with the other character pairings too, but obviously I\'m totally for the main pairing. This chapter was interesting. The whole \'you belong to me\' thing is kind of weird. Like I would think Rei would be both confused and repulsed by it. In the sense that, \'oh well I thought you hated me but that\'s sweet that you consider me yours\' yet on the other hand \'you asshole! how dare you say i belong to you. i\'m my own person, not a prize for you\' type thing. It\'s interesting the way you\'ve gathered his thoughts. Can\'t wait til you update on this.
person Draza
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, yeah, poor rei...his life just seems to be a one-way ticket up shits creek...and he never had a paddle to begin with. Anyhoo! i wasn\'t expecting you too update so quickly! i\'m glade you did! and let me guess, your home from college for march break? i hope you enjoy it! i\'m not so lucky. out of high school for a week, working for a week *sighs* it\'s a lose lose situation. kinda like what rei\'s in (well almost, but not quite) anyways! enjoy your march break!

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