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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person Draza
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, not much excitement cept when Jin came out of the bedroom *fans self vigorously* is it hot in here or is it me? anyhoo, you should do another one of those things that you did b4...ok that was as clear as mud. umm...that thing where it was guess which one i am. i thought that was great! just do it every now and then! it would make writting the story even more interesting ne? and poor Raoul...rei (the damn bastard) is leading him on complete with leash and doggie bone (no pun intended) dangling in front of him!!!
person Youko1x2
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAH~!! You\'re so mean to mai Rei~!! Haha, thats...forgivable...-I GUESS!!! You better have Kai make nice swee~t love to Rei!! ANd I was kind of disturbed bai Rei and Raul, but I guess I\'ll let it sli~de, haha j/p, grea work so far, I was so happy when I saw chapter 20 up, YAY!! I\'lls like, \"YAY SHE UPDATED!!!!\" ::read:: Mai stories sux and I can never finish any chapter stories none the less!! SO I ENVY YOU\'S!!!!! KEEP IT UP!!!!
person Youko1x2
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I review again....YOUR LEMONS ARE SO DAMN HOT!!N OMGOD!! I HAD TO GO AND WASH MAI FACE AFTERWARDS!!! Haha, well, atleast take a drink of water , but they were hot, haha. =^^=
person Chibi Drigger
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OoOoOoOOOOoooh!...Nice chapter! ^_- I liked it. Not lots of accitement but still very good none the less!! Well. Untill next chapter revie..

Ci@o

-Cd
person Padfootlet
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaww...Poor Rei...
O.o;; Kai...had a thing for Wyatt?! ><
heh...sry but I hated that kid...Rei is SO much better ^^
anyway..Keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON!
person nicki
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you got my email right if not its domon_girl@yahoo.com hey great story keep it up and keep emailin me when you update k thanx
person GS*
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. great chappi!
but i was wondering something. when Kai came in to the bathroom when Rei was there. um... was Kai feeling up on him when he was still peeing?. lol just wondering cause then that\'ll b kinda weird. XP
and i knew Ty would b mad . but wow! he just blew up! and y is Rei still kissing Raul when he knows he\'s with Kai? isnt that leading Raul on and kind of messing with Kai\'s mind? lol. Rei\'s a bad boy! XD. keep up the fantastic work!!!!!!!! woohooo!!!!!!!!!
person Sam
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story it\'s sooooo good! And what will Kai do for Rei poor performance? Well please update soon. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story.
person kiotana
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i suggest you make kai jealous since ray doesn\'t want or can\'t tell raul that his feelings are for kai.....i don\'t think kai will get jealous of the wimp but maybe a new student can come in....or something like that.well up to you and update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Hikaru_chan_4ever
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor rei. . he got kicked out. . (unless i read wrong?). . poor Rei. i hope things turn out okay. please update soon!

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