rate_review Reviews

Yeah! I can't wait for the next Ch to be put up. Every night at boot camp a few months back I would try to think of what may happen next in this. I love it. You should change the names and make it a book.

I really hope you update this. But if you don't want too, than don't, your choice.

no!!! don't take a break... i wanted to read the end.. *runs of crying* i love this fiction so much..
(i know, i'm crazy) great job!!

-blinks- You did not just do that. Argh that sucks. Now what shall I have to look soreward to in the Beyblade section. This isone of the only fics I read for Beyblade. Darn.

Well anyways I'd beg for you to continue but I decided to go with a more passive 'no preasure' route so I hope that someday you will get back to it. And when you do I'd appreciate it if you could email me and let me know you're back to writing the fic. Until then goodbye and may you be struck by inspiration.

plz plz plz write again soon u cant leave it like this i managed to get thru it in 2 sittings plz write more plz!

Good luck with everything! I hope you post another chapter sometime, it's one of the lovliest beyblade fanfics on this site!

AFF cut off my last review, sorry about that >.< I'll email the proper review to you =)

*sniffles* I want more but I know I can't have more coz you aren't writing more at the moment ;_______; *clings* I love the story and I think you're doing awesome work with it! I've started writing my own fan fics as well (about BB of course, I'm a Beyblade fan foreva <3) but I can't even finish them coz my idea is blown away with one single thought that crosses my mind while I'm writing. But you, YOU have written Innocent Dance for over FIFTY. DAMN. LONG. CHAPTERS. So please, cheer up and continue, you're an awesome writer even though there are spelling mistakes, but who cares?! I'm a beta reader myself, so I can see the mistakes, but I DON'T CARE!!!! Because this story is so awesome, great and fantastic that the mistakes don't matter at all! This plot is so damn great that I really feel jealous because of it. *hugs you very tightly* Please do write more, although you keep saying you feel like you can't get a grib of your writing anymore I think that you haven't lost your touch at all!

Oh damn, I would write more but I have to go now, Mum is coming to sleep =/ (the computer is in her room) But hey, please email me if you have any kinds of troubles or things that you'd want to talk about! *hugs* You can always come and talk to me, no matter what the subject is *smiles and hugs you again*

Oh, and who was the one from DBSK with the kitty cat in "Hug"? ^_^

Ch.5 (Author's note)
I'll always be checking anyways^^
Love this story too much to give up on it :heart:
Have a nice break!

I think you might know me better as White Tiger but it's been so bloody long I can't remember. But yeah..I looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove the story! You better not bloody call a quits! If this story is anything it's the complete oposite of lame. It's got ME on the end of my seat and basically crying for many parts. And it's hard to make my cry...ok? -nods- But yeah. I absolutly love it..I was thinking about printing it out just to have it if I ever want to read it again. Hahahahaha. Make my friends read it. XD But yeah...fantastic. So keep it up and don't do nothing too mean to poor ol' Kai and Rei.. -sniff- They've had it harsh for the past little while. ;-;....XD But yeah!

Ciao~!

-Chibi.
(Or White Tiger...wichever. X3)