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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person Fantasy
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok! Get uysed to my constant reviews XD! Well anyway, HOW DARE YOU HURT RAUL! He was so sweet.... I\'m all for Kai and Rei but DONT HURT RAUL! HE IS LIKE MAX OR SOMTHING, you know, puppyish... WAHHH!!!!!
person Draza
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles and dances around* i won i won i won! yay!!! Ok i have to think up something good...really good..hmmmm
person kiotana
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that felt shorter than it really was.....plz continue.....every day.....forever.....PLZ
person GS*
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww poor Raul!! and poor Rei. gosh it was like getting slaped in the face when they read the reviews out loud! its like getting an F in a tst or something. i fear 4 Rei during his next class.
and Takao is such a good friend to do that hahahaha. xP yes wut will happen next? tell me! lol
person angelz heat
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww...poor Raul ;_;

At first when you said Rei went outside and saw a red head [or something like that], I thought that it was Raul, not Tala...ah oh wells. Its really good! Haha Tyson\'s about to beat Kai up and Julia\'s wanting to beat Rei up...now the cutest cople is about to get beaten up! Hahahaha j/k j/k...but I hope you update soon! I can\'t wait to see what happens next!
person crazy nek0-JIN
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chaaa, I really liked the drawing idea. I\'ve been itching to draw Rei in that outfit for some time. I...can\'t guess which one you were ^-^;;;

Anyways...YAY for LEMON! FINALLY!!! EEE! That made me like...uber happy~!!!! I was squeee-ing and just being a crazy yaoi fangirl~ Fwaa! And the KaRe part is coming closer! Yay!!! I\'m so happyyyyy~!! ^_^
person evilchild (not signed in)
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s been awhile since I last reviwed one of you fics but I just had to review! I love this fic so much!!! When I come to this website (which is everyday), Beyblade is the first section I look in to see if you updated! This is like one of the best Beyblade fics I\'ve read yet!!!! I just had to put it in my recommended reading section! This is so good! Kai\'s a bastard, Re\'s confused, Tyson\'s a freak... what more could I ask for?! I know! The next chapter! Can\'t wait until you update again!!

To that contest:
Is it B or C?
person angelz heat
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you\'re the sincere one! My answer is D)sincere one

Cute chapter! I wanna know if Tyson beated him up or not! That\'s be so cool...a fight! Hehe well hope you update soon! Its getting really good! Well, it IS good already!

Tchao!
person Hikaru-chan-4ever
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! AND YES! I was righT! i was like \"Kai\'s probably whispering something like I love you. . . \" YES! *does a happy dance* okay
um. . i don\'t think i\'ll get this right. . but. . My first guess is that you were the Tall girl. My second guess is that you were the short one. .. yeah .. neways.. even if i don\'t win. .PLEASE MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER LONG AND UPDATE SOON! *glomps* THIS IS SOOOOO GREAT!
person Fantasy
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok sorryz! I review alot.... Well anyway I wanted to congradulate you on chapter 17 comming out and... YOU BETTER NOT STOP! But anyway so far I love the story. I really cant wait to see what happens with Tala, is he ACUALLY gonna ask Rei out? And if so, what will Rei say? And Kai! What will Kai say? And Raul, what will he say? AND I must know what happens with Garland, and Jin, I got the impression Jin doesn\'t like Garland XXD! Well hopefully my review has once again enlightened your day XP Well later! ^^

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