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just a little reread.what did kai whisper to him and....what will happen next?will ray tell someone that kai rapped him?will he call it rape?will he screw up again in the next play?will raul tell him about thinking they weren\'t meant to be?will they break up?will ray be depressed and quit.what the heck was kai doing with a vibrater.....i don\'t want to know the answer to that one but i want answers.i love kai but i have to admit he\'s cruel ....for now.*hugs poor ray*u just cry your eyes out ray.i think you\'ve had enough punishment................*kai glares*...for now*quivers in fear*

....................i feels soo stupid....4 somereason my comp screwed the chapters up so yea.....>.< aghh! *embrassed!!!!!!* hahahah. #^_^# 4give my stupidiness...hahah.yea....i didnt read the chapi yet i just felp to stupid i had to write something...>o< SRY! me go read now. heh heh >_<;;

Damn in a case like that one, i would cry
And leave

Is just too cruel, Kai has no respect for others
And he knows Ray lust for him
He is just plain crazy

Usually I would hate Ray, actually I do
But in your story I just feel sorry for him

Poor poor little kitty

man that was nasty....MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE....BREATHING.....MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE .....WHAT IS RAY GONNA DO?

hey great chapt. keep going and keep emailin me when you update thanx

O

Awwww, they didn\'t screw!!! *crawls into a corner and cries* Ah well, it\'s nice to know that Rei\'s thinking dirty thoughts about Kai. Hehehehe....Kai\'s such an ass. Man, I want to know his REAL reason for hating Rei. And I dunno, I\'d like to see more Tala. You know, see this little \'aquaintance\' thing develop into something more...friendly? *winkwink* If not, I\'ll just imagine it in my head. Hehe.

Anywhosits, I do hope you get some more sleep, dear. It\'s not healthy to be deprived of such :P

ARGGGGHHHHHH!!! are Brooklyn and Jin EVER going to get together?

noo! dont rewrite the story over. i really wanted to c wut happens next. i was at the good part. \'n\'

but i kinda feel sry 4 Rei. its like he\'s reliving all his bad moments again. hahah.i mean NOOO!!!!! lol. hey mayb u can make Kai niceeer to him ay? hahah lol. continue writting!

as usual you let me die of excitement and impatience for what will happen next.make your chapters a little longer plz.they get shorter and shorter every time and i