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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person Rain
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE this story!!!!!!!! I can't wait until it's finished!!! Keep up the good work!!! =^-^=
person cutenekojin
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh!! this chapter was so great! ^^ really loved it, I can't wait to read the next, you really have to hurry up with it! Chop chop! XD lol, sorry, excitement over took me ^.^

Oh! I and I dont want to be mean or anything but, YOU WILL HAVE TO FIGHT WITH ME TO GET JAEJOONG!! XD hahah! because of you and introducing DBSK in this story, I totally fell in love with the Korean Group! ^^ lol, now, I dont even speak one word Korean and I know all the songs by heart! XD Lol and I madly fell in love with Jaejoong...Now that's where really I wanted to tell you, it is that...you didn't really spell the names right ^^; I think you went either according to ear or you picked it up to someone else. So, if ever you want to write a letter to Jaejoong, here's how to write his name properly XD (Its just to help, its not to be mean, promise!! ^^; )
Jejung. Jae-Joong (he's the lead signer, not the leader. He only is in the middle of the pictures because he's the shortest XD)
Yucheon. Yoochion
Yunhon. Yunho (he's the leader by that way ^^)
Junsu and Changmin , you got those right! ^^ want me to tell you their nicknames as well&? xD lol, okay! XD
Jae-Joong - hero
Yunho - U-know
Yoochion - Micky
Junsu - Xiah
Changmin - Max

there ya go! And I REALLY really LOVED your chapter, like your story is the best! Thanks for all the chapters you uploaded and all!! Hope to read some more later...Sorry for the huge review and sorry if I offended you in someway, I really didn't mean too!
person Anon
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DON'T GIVE UP YET.A LOT PEOPLE READ THIS STUFF BUT DOESN'T REVIEW.DON'T GIVE UP!111
person darkkit2000
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHY CAN'T YOU LET THEM BE HAPPY FOR MORE THAN HALF A CHAPTER!!!!!!! WHY???!!!??!!! Ok I'm done but now I pray Kai comes and saves Rei's and ass and then kills Boris. Great chapter, but I want to beat you for the cliff hanger which I guess means your doing a good job.

Love Lots,
Darkkit
person ash
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is pretty great and i wonder if kai will hang around to save rei from that asshole although i would be totally cool if kai returned to italy and rei got rapedXD.ii just want to say that the performance scene in this chapter sucked. considering its been so important for more than half the story alooting it what 10 undescriptive lines is more than a bit of an anticlimax. im not saying to have described the moves that wouldnt have worked at all but u should have described it from ray's angle with his feelings and thoughts and all the excitement for him etc. it was probably the most important moment of his life and so much happened becauseof the performance . somehow somewhere could you do a flashback scene which deals with how he actually felt throughout the performance please ending it so abruptly is disappointing. please update soon
person Kiotana
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 54

You have once again dragged me into loving this fic forever!
Nice long chapter, some sex, humour, a performance, some suspence and an added bonus of videos!
I love you*hugs*
And yeah! You better come to some kind of ending. The worry is really stressing me; can't even concentrate sometimes!
person kitty
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i totally love this story and it is not lame it is AWESOME and i can't wait for the next chapter to come out
person Anon
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
where are you?!?! we miss you and this fic!
person TigerPhoenix44
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the best fanfiction that i have ever read!!!!
I totally cant wait till the next chapter!!!!!
You have to right the next one soon, PLEASE and THANK YOU!!!

-Love TigerPhoenix44
person R-chan
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! *.* Great chapter!
>.< Oh no, Boris again >____< I knew, the end would have been too good... *sighs*
Great, great chapter!

Keep updating!!

BeyBye!

R-chan ^.^
aka Hoshisaki

*goes to look for some cruel way to make Boris suffer for bothering Rei* ò.ó Grrr...

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