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for Innocent Dance

by Might

person FuKouHei (not logged in)
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I\'m sorry you have the flu. DON\'T HUG ANYONE! I hugged my friend Rath after she had the flu and I had it the next day. Is Jin Takao\'s brother or that Bryan clone w/ Brooklyn in GRev.? Anyway I really love your story and get well soon!
person Silver rose fox
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!! I knew Rei wasing to make it. I just feel sorry that Kai can\'t is the beauty of it. And this chapter was very very good.^-^ I really can\'t wait to see what happen next. So please make another chapter when youm can. Pretty please cherry on top.*-* I loving it so keep up the good work.
Your Fan,
Silver Rose Fox
a.k.a
Foxxy.^-*
person Draza
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww...*hands some chicken noodle soup* sorry to hear your down with the flu. I just started reading yuour story today and it ROCKS!!!!! keep it comin\' keep it comin\'!!
person kiotana
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i know you like to torture me!!!!!damn you this is great...
GO RAY!!!!!!!!this is awesome!!!!what will happen next?!!!!?!!!i must know!!!!!tell me.tell me.tell me.tell me.tell me!!!!!!
kai so cares!!!i love kai.....now if only kai would stare at ray with a little hint of admiration*dreamy*
HALE GREAT AUTHOR WRITE MORE.....PLZ*bowing to the master*
person kiotana
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry about my last review.......your summary is fine......i just read wrong......
i love this story.i can\'t get it out of my head........i really wonder how ray and kai are gonna get along if he makes him miserable like this.....i read till chapter six so i know....poor ray.i should print this story....ONLY WHEN IT\'S COMPLET!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Pam
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it ^_^
And yes, It kinda reminds me a bit Of KS
Kaleido Star is such a pretty show...
XD
Rambling in here...
XD
Well, I like this story a lot ^_^
person Silver rose fox
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story it\'s goood.^-^ I can\'t wait to see the next chapter.Hope Kai has a thing for Rei.
person kiotana
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh thank god he isn\'t kicked out.....i feel his pain.....i would have givin up.........ray\'s a lot better than me with the never give up thing.kai as usual is an ass but i love him anyway.....he dances?....well on with the next chapter
person kiotana
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chappie!!!!!i love this story already....though it doesn\'t have much to do with your summary.......yet
keep it up
person kiotana
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!PLZ continue.....life means nothing without me reading the rest
great author bring me updates*bowing*

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