rate_review Reviews

yay for updates!

OMG YOU HAVE TO ADD MORE BEFORE I GO ABSOLUTELY INSANE!! Why did it have to end there??!

Cassy: Don\'t beat yourself up too much about the story. I think you are doing just fine with it. I must admit every time I see the word doll now I shiver. Thanks for that... You really have to keep the story up, don\'t stop until it is finished! If you do... well I\'ll have to hang you and I really don\'t want to do that. I wish you luck with the rest of the story and I beg you to get the next chapter out.... SOON! Okay, not soon NOW. I don\'t mean to be pushy, but I hate cliffhangers. Have fun with your story and keep up the good work!

Nikki: You cound like a teacher or something.

Cassy: Leave me alone! I don\'t sound like that! -throws knivesat her-

Nikki: Eep! -dodges knives- Yeah, Warrior, keep up the good work! -runs off-

Cassy: GET BACK HERE! -runs after her-

That was SO AWESOME!! PLez update Soon!!! I love this story so much, all time fav!!! lol

Hey! I don\'t think it\'s lame!
and I can\'t wait to see what happens and why Kai is being all distant!
Update Soon!
PLEASE
^___^

love the story

love the story

love the story

Hi there. I have been reading your story for the past few days now. I just want to tell you that I think it's amazing!! You have so much talent!! Closer to the beggining of the story I totally hated Kai and Ray the way the two of them acted drove me crazy!! But as the story progressed I came to be very fond of them, despite the fact that they keep playing games with each other. I also would like to say that I LOVE BRYAN/BORIS!! And I am a little bit sad that he has to be an ass in this story but oh well. ALL HAIL THE HOTTNESS THAT IS BRYAN!! LOL. I'm a freak I know. Anyway I can't wait until the next chapter is up, I love how you write and I can't believe this story has 53 chapters in it!!!! How do you do it?? I'm working on my newst Beyblade fic and right now I only have 5 chapters written and only the first one posted!! Anyway like I said befor you have a lot of talent and I hope you continue this story it is really great. This is one of the longest reviews I have written LOL. Well keep up the great work....Oh I was wondering, if it's not to much trouble, if you could check out the first chapter of my story and tell me what you think?? I would be really thankful to get feedback from an awesome writter like yourself. Right now it's called Unknown because i can't think of a good title for it.
Well Peace Out
Winter-Rae

*Squee* This chapter was so adorable! (nr. 32)
I didn't find it lame at all, as you stated =3
I wasn't even going to review untill I had finished all the chapters, but this chapter was just so adorable that I had to =3
Wonderful job!
*goes off to read the other chappies*