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his name is rou dai kaioshin

I can't believe that I forgot that you wrote a yuri. And of what I consider to be one of the hottest pairings too. You mention showing it at SY but I guess I'd either jumped ship by then or I just compltely forgot about it.

As I said for the yuri that you posted recently at LJ, it's a tad hard to find some good yuri smut so I'm very happy that I happened upon this. I'm not quite sure why there's chapter one and two in the same entry but it didn't disturb the fic for me.

My favourite part has to be Juu's changing flavours. In almost any other yuri smut piece that would scream 'BAD P0RN' in big red cap locks of doom. She's one of the few characters who can pull that off ^_^

And the ending was great. I don't put it past the guy at all. I'll admit, if I were in his position I would.

Good story, but let me give you some insight on DBZ. Eighteen, like her twin brother, was actually a human turned cyborg and she had a bomb inside of her. When the wish was made, it was made for that bomb to be removed. As for the Old Kai, he really didn't have a name per se. Goku called him Old Kai where Kibito Kai (Supreme Kai/Kibito Potara fusion) called him Elder. He was actually a Supreme Kai back in the day so maybe call him Elder Supreme Kai?

Can't wait for the next chapter if there's going to be one.

this story is really good

Great story. Krillin had wished for 17 and 18 to be made human but the dragon could not grant the wish so Krillin wished the bombs to be removed and that wish was granted so 18 is still an android (dubbed version)/cyborg (subtiled version).

This was a very good story, well written to (despite the errors that this site made on its translation of your story). I quite enjoyed that, I enjoy reading anything really but that was the first really good yuri story that I actually read. ::claps for you:: ^__^ yay! It was a creative story, I mean, it could have been longer with the story plot, but it was good. You should make more stories like this, why? Because there are hardly any yuris out there and if they are, it\'s all sappy! There are only normal and yaoi stories, never any yuris! And you did so great on this story.
Anwyay,
I best be on my way now.
Again, good job with this story.
(I thought it was humorous/greatness) lol
Bai now!

~Lady Melanie~

KICK ASS!! One word says it all! KICK MUTHA FRIKKIN ASS!?! Ok three... O.o;... Detail was agonizingly sweet and dare I say... juicy? This is my new fave fic! Brownie Points for you!!


Your Klondyke Bar,
Infamous Myo

That my dear was wonderus
and If Billy were here he\'d be
like ok wow ...
uhhhh Noel can we uhh you know in the uhhh over there
uhh does your dad know where my hand is?

darlin you rock!