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for Stupid Monkey

by VegsMate

person Blue_haired Beauty
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! fabulous LONG story. I just loved it!!! So wonderfully written. I\'d almost like another chapter. ;0)

person saiyan_dragon
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON!!! This fanfic is one of the best ones I have ever read...no joke!
person Shinako
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aiya! I\'m addicted. ><\' You must update soon, ne? I can\'t wait!
person Sk8turgurl
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying Stupid Money very much! As of today I have read Chapter 15. Excellent writing. Please update soon!
person ENYA OF NEXUSS
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI I REALLY LOVE HOW THE STORY IS GOING HAHA YAMCHA GOT IT THE FAKE SERVES HIM RIGHT ><
NOW BULMA IS FREE TO SEE HOW GREAT VEGETA IS
CAN\'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER SEEYA
person Share_Starbursts
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'m lovin this fic! lol, i check back here two or three times a week just to see if you\'ve updated it again or not! i love the way you portray the characters and the interactions between them and i am definately feeling better now that yamcha and bulma have broken up, lol...but many props to you! this is excellent!
~meh ^_^
person suisheu
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really really really really really (and so on) WANTED THERE TO BE SOME FORM OF ASS KICKING MEANT FOR YAMCHA! I mean, the way she found out wasn\'t what expected, but she sill only thinks that it was this one girl over two months. when will she find out about every other time over the years? She should not have felt guilty about wanting to be with Veegta. Hell, if someone treated me the way he does her \'d put everything else out of mind. Lol. The way that you describe the two of them together just makes my head spin. It\'s the perfect thing. Even gets me longing for someone that I can truly love. *yes yes we all know that love like that is only on paper and not in life* I\'m very interested in the relationship between goku and Vegeta. When Vegeta presses that button one time too many what will the outcome be? the waterfight had me laughing so hard, it was so cute! And everyone has kept their exact eprsonalities to the very last letter. You are truly an amazing writer. I\'ve been checking this story every day and reading every bit I can. I can\'t seem to think of anything else, and that rarely happens to me. I have been captivated by your word and I like it.
person enya of nexuss
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
1 I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORY
2 IHOPE YOU WON\'T BE EASY ON YAMCHA WHEN BULMA FINDS OUT THAT HE IS A CHEATING DOG! ><
3 I TYHINK YOU ARE A TRUELY TALANTED WRITTER
AND FINALLY 4 PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY I PROMISE TO REVIEW EACH CHAPTER
person Share_Starbursts
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
marvelous story! i [heart] it. i definately would like to see it continued. i love the way you put it all together, the story flow great. although, the only thing i noticed is that sometimes its a bit difficult to tell right away when you switch which character\'s viewpoint you\'re at. but other than that...bravo!
person Caralin Fury
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A-HA...I recognized the title of this story, but as I read it did not occur to me this was a complete re-write of the \"Stupid Monkey\" I had read before (posted in the good ole\' days of pre-censorship ff.net).

I didn\'t even realize this was the same until I came to the part where Vegeta was looking up \"cats\" on the internet.

Amazing re-work...I don\'t even know where to start. Your writing style has changed (as has you pen name) and I have to say I am extremely impressed!

Great job and I can\'t wait to read more!

Caralin

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