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I enjoyed it so far a lot and hope you wont abandon it.

Started out good, and it\'s gettin\' better! Including the spelling errors. There\'re a lot less of \'em now. I can\'t wait to learn more about the mythical-demon feud, and about what Duo\'s going to do to make Heero\'s life hell (Get it - demon, hell? Okay, I know it sucked.). Actually, I was kinda thrilled when you mentioned that most demons were weaker than mythicals. I hate stories that treat power levels as the be-all and end-all of existence, and I\'m looking forward to reading another story that demonstrates that if physical (or whatever) strength is the only thing that determines dominance, then bears would be driving cars and humans would be scrounging for berries in the woods.

cool, you updated soon !!

nice third chapter, I wonder what will happens next now

This is such a cute fic, I hope Duo and Heero will get along soon

really good fics, different of what I first tought ^^ I can\'t wait for chapter three now !!

This looks very interesting, and it\'s a plot that\'s rather different from any others I\'ve seen. I especially liked your handling of Wufei\'s character. He just wouldn\'t seem like himself if he weren\'t being at least a little ornery. The only real problem with the story is some weird spelling errors. Nothing\'s actually misspelled, exactly, you\'ve just used near-homonyms in several places, like \'thrown\' instead of \'throne\', \'curtain\' instead of \'certain\', and in the title, \'oh\' instead of \'of\'. It looks like you\'ve used a spell-checker and picked the wrong correction, \'at\'s all.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON CANT WAIT WHAT AN EVIL BASTARD TREIZE AND WILL THERE BE RELENA BASHING :-;

Well, this is starting out well. You seem to be going for the master/slave motif, I look forward to the interactions between Duo and Heero once they both realize what Heero\'s done - and what a mistake he made! ^.^ At any rate, thank you for sharing, and I look forward to more.

Very Well Done cant wait to see the next chapters and then the lemon if the is one i guess its up to you but keep up the good work

Hi. I think that your story is vary interesting and I really hope that you continu. Later