rate_review Reviews

Woah. Amazing work--- exceptional lemon writing.

Oh Man I am loving this! Please please keep writting. It warms my twisted little heart to read well written stuff like this. Are they bonded? is that way the mark aacting that that? or is it something more? The only thing I was a bit taken a back with was Vegeta being bottom but you made it work. Keep it up.

Hmmm... Interesting concept. Gotenks as the fusion who stayed. Have to say though, the format is really confusing. I struggled through the first chapter. The second was better since there was some more character development. (I\'m not a big reader of lemons for lemons sake - I like to know more about the motives, etc. driving the action.) I think the information revealed in chapter two should have been early in the first chapter. More character develpment early on would have added to the angst/suspense factor. The sex was good, but I was so busy asking what was going on I couldn\'t fully appreciate it. I want to see more of this, but I hope for more explanations.