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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!
Wow, this story is quite impressive, being that long and even pretty good! The character of Nayo is interesting, though I\'d have prefered if his role was smaller. ^^x
Well, I\'m looking forward to the next part, although I honestly don\'t know how Goku and Co yould get out of that safely.
Keep up the great work!
~Horizont
Wow, this story is quite impressive, being that long and even pretty good! The character of Nayo is interesting, though I\'d have prefered if his role was smaller. ^^x
Well, I\'m looking forward to the next part, although I honestly don\'t know how Goku and Co yould get out of that safely.
Keep up the great work!
~Horizont
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Finally, control is back.
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t believe you updated so quickly!!!! And this chapter just leaves me drooling in suspense! I know, drooling is gross.... What will happen to Vegeta and everyone else?!! Will Frieza capture them all? What will happen! Thank you for getting a new chapter out so quickly!
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Did Vegeta not fight because Nayo didn\'t want him to? Just wondering. Great fic by the way. Like the F/V and F/Z thing going on. Makes it a bit darker than other fics.
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay. Fireza is going to get his cummupance.
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Er Reverse that.
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Hope Zarbon and Radditz end up together! How cute would that be? Also, it would be awesome if Vegeta were captured too and had to help Nayo out! I mean, he\'s been nothing but mean to the kid the whole time and this is the perfect opportunity for Vegeta to watch over Nayo. Specially since he knows what Nayo\'s going through. Think about it! Love how you update a lot more than other authors on the net! You have Frieza\'s personality right on!
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh. Good new and bad news.
Everything is so well described.
Keep it up.
Everything is so well described.
Keep it up.
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Frieza gets what he desrves.
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far this story is really good I\'m not trying to rush you when I say I can\' t wait for the next chapter keep up the good work