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person Camaro
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When you wrote \"Existed\" I think you meant \"Excited\". And \"Paints\" should probably be \"Pants\" if I\'m not crazy.

Camaro
person Lokiloki
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! Why aren\'t you writing more? :(
person Broken
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one awesome story!!! I can hardly wait for the next chapter!! Poor goku... wait no.. poor Vegeta... I never knew goku could skip? what\'s skipping?
person leelee
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far!!! Could you pplleeaassee e-mail me when you update? If you can my e-mail\'s foxy_brown707@yahoo.com . Thankz a mil!! Update soon!!!


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person aphinna
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fanfic please write more soon
person shameika
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool fanfic can\'t wait to read the next chapters update soon
person Shinna
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this story. Keep up the good work. update soon
person Vega Daemonson
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. There were a couple of spelling mistakes but other than that, this is a very well written story. Please update soon!

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Vega
person Jhon Doe
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. It\'s a bit dark, but I am hoping for a happy ending. The story is well thought out and I would like to see this story continued. Please, update soon!

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