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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your comedic touch. This is really turning out to be a cute story.
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha, very adorable! Great story! They can only get better lol.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh! that was funnnnyyyyy! ...funny and hot...
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I'm glad you finished this! I appreciated how realistic you made it. It's so tempting to want to make virginal characters perform at a porn star level, and many, many stories do that. So I really appreciated Vegeta's flat out naivety, and Bulma's hilarious, um, enthusiasm. Haha!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omfg XD I laughed all the way through this whole story...that was some funny shit dude.
But yeah, I doubt they'd be that clueless but oh well.. it was hell of hillarious so it's all good. ^_^;
But yeah, I doubt they'd be that clueless but oh well.. it was hell of hillarious so it's all good. ^_^;
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~applause~ I love it! Humerous in all the right places, sexy enough to make a grown woman blush, and worded in such a way that gives the reader the oppertunity to visuallize what is going on. I died laughing so many times that my husband had to come see what all the 'ruckus' was.
Can't wait to read more of your work.
LOVE!
V.M.
Can't wait to read more of your work.
LOVE!
V.M.
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad you finished it. ^_^
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic. I\'ve never read a fic where they\'re both virgins. I have to know what comes next. Will he be all dominate like always or will he be lost half-way through. Please, continue.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is realistically tasteful. I can\'t wait to read more, not to mention...I do so love men who pounce.
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the story\'s goin so good right now! ya really, really, really, need ta up- date soon!! i hpoe u didnt stop writing it..cuz yr doin great so fare! ya just gada up-date!