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for Honeymoon

by Debbie

person Moonlight Shadow
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*breaks out in laughter* omg, this is great cant wait for the next chapter lol XD
person catt
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm not bad at all, I like where this is going, and its kinda sweet to see vegeta for once being the shy type. Lol. Anywho keep up the good work. Can\'t wait for the next update!!!^_^
person KuroKen
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Chuckles* Now that\'s how its done! Perfect characterization and great pacing on the delivery of humor. Plus Vegeta and Bulma\'s inner dialog is on the money.

Looking forward to the next installment.
person Macha
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, I hope you have a plan for the next chapter, but if you don\'t, I have an idea. Bulma being a business woman and all, just may have a laptop with her (even though it is suppose to be her honeymoon), and having a laptop, may have reserved a room with internet hook up. *winks* The two may be able to find a \'road map\' there.

Anyway, I hope you do have a plan for another chapter.

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