rate_review Reviews

I\'ve read your fic on FF.net. I liked it even then, but it seemed like it took you a long time to update there. I\'m glad I found it here, but then I noticed that a lot of folks have moved from FF to here, for more freedom, and other things, like adware. I hope you update this soon. I really enjoyed it. EM

wow. this story is f*cking amazing. please update soon! i\'m constantly checking back to see if you\'ve updated yet :D

I LOVE IT! That\'s all i can say. glowing praise for you! ^.^ You rock.

This is by far the best Fullmetal Alchemist fanfiction I\'ve EVER read. The plot is very well done, i love it!! ^.^ Squee!

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! Thank you so much! I like these last two chapters, and the way it gave Al an opening to go find Roy. Ed\'s going to be pissed when he finds out Al went out without him. (Holds hand out like a greedy three year old) More please!

OMG i luv this story!!! one of the best i\'ve read in a long time! wow this is so awsome! keep up the great work!!!!
*~CoOkIeS~*

Maxwell Sa~n! (tugs on your shirtsleeve) More ple~ase?

Now, I never intentionally clicked on this story. It was something I found while on Google; I\'m not a big fan of NC 17 stories, but yours barely include any of that, so I decided to give it a read.

Characterization was perfect. You captured Roy\'s sarcasm quite well, as well as Edward\'s sensitive nature about his height, and it\'s just like Alphonse to chide in innocently. Same Winry with her wrench. Never have I been so engrossed in a story as captivating and original. You\'ve certainly brought Full Metal Alchemist into a new light, whereas Roy isn\'t the commanding officer anymore, instead a \'mongrel.\' Only part that disturbed me was the one with Paninya, but of course, that\'s me. Nonetheless, I have fully appreciated these chapters, and I admit, was disappointed when it ended.

More so of the reason you should update. Excellent job, indeed.


~Lily

ahhh it\'s Lily again. I forgot to mention; I was looking forward to seeing Roy, despite being a \'mongrel,\' use flame alchemy, since it mentioned in vague terms why only blondies could do it. I was just wondering if you were going to include that one day, since the original plot line still pertains to the story, as in hughes liking Gracia etc etc.

My apologies.


~Lily

Please update!
*clings to ficcy*
Pwease!
-Mia